Topic: eternally silent
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Tue 11/07/06 05:14 PM
always speaking
yet no one hears me
walking away dejected and rejected
feeling introspective
is it me?
do I reek of defeat?
do I reek of valor?
what is so wrong with me
that they never hear me?
am I really speaking aloud
or is it yet another illusion??
of my insanity?
am I here?
do they see me?
why can they not hear me??
my shouts, screams, pleas
falling on deaf souls and ears
walking away dejected and rejected
feeling introspective
ever searching for the one who will hear me
ever yearning for the one who will see me
ever searching for the one who will accept me....

greeneyedlady42's photo
Tue 11/07/06 05:18 PM
You hit the nail on the head on that one cherub.
Good writing. Very personal yet something we can all relate to Im sure.
Bravo!

hosstin18's photo
Tue 11/07/06 05:20 PM
yes bravo poet keep them coming

lionsbrew's photo
Tue 11/07/06 06:59 PM
yeah girl you got a gift

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Tue 11/07/06 07:10 PM
Thank you Lion :)
And with this I bid you a good night..till the morrow~
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lionsbrew's photo
Tue 11/07/06 07:23 PM
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