Topic: Hope for a Monster!
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Tue 06/07/16 08:11 AM
Life throws these hurricanes at us,
But with you I felt like I couldn't be crushed,
You are like the constant angelic voice that calls me home,
You bring me out of this deep abyss of nothingness,
For you I give you my absolute devotion,
You give me renewed strength and clarity,
For you I want to catch these bullets of despair,
I want to move the mountains,
I know love is not something you just give away,
But for you I can be something you can love,
You transform me from an ugly Frankenstein into a man,
A super man,
For you and you alone my soul burns,
With you things aren't so black,
Things are so much brighter with many colors,
You give me something to look forward to,
You give me air so that I may breathe,
You are so much than an ordinary woman,
You give this monster hope,
You are my Hope!

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Tue 06/07/16 10:14 AM

Life throws these hurricanes at us,
But with you I felt like I couldn't be crushed,
You are like the constant angelic voice that calls me home,
You bring me out of this deep abyss of nothingness,
For you I give you my absolute devotion,
You give me renewed strength and clarity,
For you I want to catch these bullets of despair,
I want to move the mountains,
I know love is not something you just give away,
But for you I can be something you can love,
You transform me from an ugly Frankenstein into a man,
A super man,
For you and you alone my soul burns,
With you things aren't so black,
Things are so much brighter with many colors,
You give me something to look forward to,
You give me air so that I may breathe,
You are so much than an ordinary woman,
You give this monster hope,
You are my Hope!



:thumbsup:

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Tue 06/07/16 10:30 AM
So did you like it? I thought I would give it a shot?

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Tue 06/07/16 10:31 AM
There shouldn't have been a ? At the end of that sentence sorry lol

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Tue 06/07/16 10:41 AM

So did you like it? I thought I would give it a shot?


Especially this first part...


Life throws these hurricanes at us,
But with you I felt like I couldn't be crushed,
You are like the constant angelic voice that calls me home,
You bring me out of this deep abyss of nothingness,
For you I give you my absolute devotion,
You give me renewed strength and clarity,
For you I want to catch these bullets of despair,
I want to move the mountains,
I know love is not something you just give away,
But for you I can be something you can love,
You transform me from an ugly Frankenstein into a man,

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Tue 06/07/16 10:54 AM
nero3099

Did you check out the forum section for books? There are comic book threads. A few are mine.
The movie section, has reviews on comic book movies & the new trend / adgenda to make some characters female and/ or gay.
frustrated

My little brother, got me started on all the comic stuff & all the changes now.
I will message you. Because I have a rant coming on laugh

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Tue 06/07/16 03:31 PM
Yes we definitely need to have a conversation about comic book stuff. I wish I could get more people to read my poetry, I don't know how though lol.

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Tue 06/07/16 03:59 PM

Yes we definitely need to have a conversation about comic book stuff. I wish I could get more people to read my poetry, I don't know how though lol.


Lots of people, read this forum.
It is just very..very slow today.

And I can message you, about copyrights & see what we come with.

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Tue 06/07/16 04:04 PM
Thanks you have been an amazing help to me!

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Wed 06/08/16 05:25 AM
Love line 3:
You are like the constant angelic voice that calls me home.happy

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Wed 06/08/16 05:32 AM
I've written a new one today, called Ill never know within this forum!

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Fri 06/10/16 10:04 AM
What a piece! Great write, Nero. I will read it over and over for a time. Every time I get new inspiration!

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Mon 06/13/16 04:20 AM
Thank you for your kind words!