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Slowly Fading
I have felt the world cold and dark empty… I have imagined as you struggled to breathe your last breath… Death after years of being a part of life's struggle has finally called you out… And me now alone… struggle with memories …slowly fading imagine this emptiness this is hell This is how my love of losing you feels like to me… A spouse is lost…and the remaining person is a widow A parent dies…a child left behind is an orphan But a parent who loses a child…there is no name…there is nothing All of life's magic, wonder and meaning slowly dies when your heart is ripped from your body…and you find yourself…slowly fading |
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I think the closest a person can come to being labeled after loosing a child is forever wounded.
Beautiful poem and I do think you are as good as others out here if not better. Thank you for sharing |
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tragic... Not the poem, that has impact.
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eloquent..
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thank you for sharing your most intimate thoughts
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The words were delicate, touched you shared more. Thoughts to you
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