Topic: Advice
Mylyfe71's photo
Sat 04/23/16 09:13 PM
Can you review and let me know what I should improve on? Thank you.

SitkaRains's photo
Sat 04/23/16 10:47 PM
Hi I may the odd duck on this.. I Like your profile.. I do think maybe some more pictures might be helpful. You also don't answer if you have children or if you want children that could be a big deal for some women.

I do understand the comment about Interests almost anything.. because I have such a diverse interest level and yet it might help if you list maybe 3 or 5 top interests.

Best wishes in your search

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Sun 04/24/16 03:05 AM
Great profile. Short and sweet, says it all, good phrasing etc. Nice piccies. I wouldn't change a thing! No, lemme rephrase that: don't you dare change a thing! Lol.
One of the best profiles I've ever seen from a man

Good luck!
flowerforyou

mzrosie's photo
Sun 04/24/16 01:50 PM

Can you review and let me know what I should improve on? Thank you.


You have more than one photos, and you main pic clearly shows your handsome face. So that's very good.

You opened your written profile with "Besides being vintage and ex-superstar quality," ... are you trying to be funny? or are you trying to be cool? cool and funny? I don't understand this... but English is my second language.

But overall your written profile shows some character, your interests and what you are looking for. So that's great.

Welcome to Mingle2
Join us in the forums and have fun making friends while looking.
Good luck in your search.
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no photo
Sun 04/24/16 02:53 PM
Why change...if she dont like shes not right :blush: