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Topic: A Touched Soul.
JaideStar Joined Sun 03/08/15 Posts: 6	Fri 04/15/16 05:49 PM
The blush of newly fallen snow touches the surroundings with it's beauty like the soul is touched by a gentle kiss. A whisper upon cool lips, heated to make one melt like that of the spring time sun. In satisfaction a red blush of joy spreads across ones face like that of a setting sun, contentment for all who are blessed by the beauty of both. Written Dec 1st, 2008 (All of my poetry is published on line in Deviant Art.)

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Sat 04/16/16 01:13 AM
Lovely...

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2637	Sat 04/16/16 12:12 PM
It's a really pretty piece JaideStar.

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Sat 04/16/16 12:56 PM
Nice

JaideStar Joined Sun 03/08/15 Posts: 6	Fri 04/29/16 03:00 PM
Thanks :) I usually don't post stuff outside of DA but thought ... why not LOL :)

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 04/29/16 05:27 PM
Gorgeous imagery. Your words and poem touched my soul with that brush of innocence and wonder.

joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Sat 04/30/16 04:56 PM
Keep posting, very nice

mzrosie Joined Wed 08/14/13 Posts: 33997	Sun 05/01/16 06:37 PM
Lovely poem

SitkaRains Joined Thu 10/09/08 Posts: 17228	Sun 05/01/16 06:59 PM
Lovely so talented

UrMissingLib Joined Sun 03/13/16 Posts: 377	Mon 05/02/16 06:16 AM
Simple but deep. Lovely.

Bahitieva Joined Mon 11/23/15 Posts: 2443	Mon 05/02/16 06:34 AM
lovely.

Robxbox73 Joined Sun 12/27/15 Posts: 5302	Mon 05/02/16 07:18 AM
Very moving. Thank you.

2gethet4ever Joined Wed 01/27/16 Posts: 61	Tue 05/10/16 12:42 PM
Good poetry is what I live and breathe for it tantalizes me!

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Fri 10/08/21 02:57 AM
SUPER ⭐⭐⭐

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3290	Fri 10/08/21 03:40 AM
Nice poem .

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