Topic: Dark Love
lighthawkx's photo
Mon 10/29/07 08:48 PM
DARK LOVE

A lovely single rose in a meadow;
moonlight makes its beauty unbearable;
A light... sprinkle down the petals;
you walk a little closer...

So elusive is the beauty;
so that like your lover;
the breeze across your skin;
the sounding of their heartbeat;
its so peaceful...

That your lovers face comes back;
so distorted by your tears;
that you finally see it clearly;
the rose, like their love, is black.

lighthawkx's photo
Mon 10/29/07 08:49 PM
just another piece of writen word. Let me know your opinion, good or bad, it is appriciated.

pennywise's photo
Mon 10/29/07 09:28 PM
not bad

mrsoonerrich78's photo
Mon 10/29/07 09:29 PM
it sound good

just_mary's photo
Mon 10/29/07 09:53 PM
poignant and sad but tells a tale far too many of us know

no_psychos_please's photo
Mon 10/29/07 10:16 PM
Very nice indeed. I enjoyed the walk flowerforyou flowerforyou