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DARK LOVE
A lovely single rose in a meadow; moonlight makes its beauty unbearable; A light... sprinkle down the petals; you walk a little closer... So elusive is the beauty; so that like your lover; the breeze across your skin; the sounding of their heartbeat; its so peaceful... That your lovers face comes back; so distorted by your tears; that you finally see it clearly; the rose, like their love, is black. |
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just another piece of writen word. Let me know your opinion, good or bad, it is appriciated.
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not bad
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it sound good
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poignant and sad but tells a tale far too many of us know
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Very nice indeed. I enjoyed the walk
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