Topic: an unfinished poem/song/life
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Mon 10/29/07 02:12 PM
listening to the songs of my yesterday
let the words lift me up,and take me away
away from this life that ive come to know
back to a place where we use to go

happy were we arms entwined as we walk along
lyrics and tune together like our favorite song
can you hear the words speak of the love that use to be
and when the song plays on does it remind you of me

as the song plays on do the memories flash by
and when the violins begin do you still cry
i play the song again as i start my life
i try to forget that your not here, my wife

now my life is just words,you see
no one here to sing along with me
no tune to my lyrics, the songs not the same
no lyrics to your tune, our song has no name

the violins are playing can you hear them above
do they still make you cry...:cry:..my love


writings from the tombs....





tmljan's photo
Mon 10/29/07 02:19 PM
Very Nice!!!

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Mon 10/29/07 02:25 PM
flowerforyou

geo54's photo
Mon 10/29/07 02:34 PM
drinker

BonnyMiss's photo
Mon 10/29/07 03:14 PM
Honey by Bobby Goldsborough does this to me, You have struck a chord, very creative and thought provoking.............Beautiful!

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Mon 10/29/07 03:41 PM
bonnymiss..thats funny how you should mention that song thats one that i listened to as i wrote this thank you..thank yall for comments or criticism ..every artist must suffer..it helps convey feelings

Snugglesbyfire's photo
Mon 10/29/07 06:10 PM
Beautiful writing from the soulflowerforyou

blonderockermom's photo
Mon 10/29/07 06:14 PM
Very beautiful, and sincere:smile: flowerforyou