Today's Poem:

"Painful Pleasure"

As I walked through the valley of the shadow of death,
I could see its figure and smell its breath.
He stood tall and slouched,
His body half human and half serpant with a forked tongue in its mouth.
As he stood in the shadows of my fate,
He drew me in with a sad look on his face.
The closer I approached,
A knot began to form in my throat.
There were bodies scattered below and above,
His eyes were stained with the color of blood.
I could feel his eyes gazing straight through me,
Only my soul and nothing else he could see.
Closer and closer he drew me to his arm,
With the look in his eye to cause me no harm.
I could not hide the fear for he smelled it on my skin,
He smiled as if to sooth me before a lake of fire he threw me with in.
Now I am stuck burning alive,
With the look of desperation in my eyes.
I can't get out there's nowhere to hide,
I guess this is the place God chose for me to die.
But I don't give up and I don't lose my faith,
Which is when my savior comes to take my place.
He wraps me in his arms,
And asures me no harm.
And when I wake up in bed,
I thank God I'm not dead.

Tell me what you think? Be honest!!! And remember Christ is the answer to all life's problems. There's nothing you can't take to the cross.

that was a really awesome poem you are really good

(((( datboi ))))

Sighhhhhhhhhhh,,, most awesome


(((( Melissa ))))

I love you

Very nice tribute to Whisper....

{{{{{{Melissa}}}}}}

Thank you its the least I could do.

very nice indeed you need to post more will be looking forward to them.


Also welcome to the site

thank you txsgal. I have wrote several poems and two others are on this site just gotta find them. I like the criticism.

I just hope whispertoascream gets the chance to read this.

where is she these days?

don't know