Topic: Like to read my poem
countrygirldrfordtr's photo
Sat 10/27/07 12:17 PM
Someone who can touch my heart,
Someone who believes in me when no one else does,
Someone who loves me in spite of of my faults,
Someone that can bring out things in me that no one is capable of,
Someone who can embrace me close and let me know everything will be alright,
Someone to grow old with,
Someone to share my hopes and dreams with,
Someone I can’t stop thinking about every minute of the day,
Someone who shows me a great deal, they love me by gazing into their eyes,
And when we touch flames create passion so great,
And we melt like a candles that are on fire,
Burning forever.


Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 10/27/07 12:22 PM
May the timing of the universe be perfect for you both when you bump into that someone.

bsujr5's photo
Sat 10/27/07 12:23 PM
wow that is a really good poem

countrygirldrfordtr's photo
Sat 10/27/07 12:26 PM
thank you very much... happy ... first time posting a poem i wrote... was questioning myself about posting it... to thank you very much for reading... flowerforyou flowerforyou

blonderockermom's photo
Sat 10/27/07 12:28 PM
very nice countrygirl....good job:smile: flowerforyou

countrygirldrfordtr's photo
Sat 10/27/07 12:29 PM
thank you blonerockermom...

mishaellyn's photo
Sat 10/27/07 02:27 PM
What a great poem. I am so proud of you. flowerforyou

no_psychos_please's photo
Sat 10/27/07 02:57 PM
I loved it! Only thing I see to question..... I would wish to always stay young in love with someone.... I'll never grow old! "Better to burn out than to fade away!" :wink:

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LAMom's photo
Sat 10/27/07 05:28 PM
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