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Topic: i've been robbed
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Fri 10/26/07 12:29 PM
i've been robbed
yeah, been broken into
and emptied
my own personal stash stolen
all that holding on
years of hoarding gone
just
like
that
now theres no place to hide
nothing more held deep inside
i've been emptied
vandalized and looted
you walked right in
slick as a knife
took all I had
all you needed
I tried to fight back
tried to hang on tight
but you, quiet
insidious thief
in the night
were stronger
you robbed me blind
your tools of the trade
honed on my savings
now I'm broke 'cause
you ...
... have...
...stolen ...
...my heart ...





malibu23wi's photo
Fri 10/26/07 12:32 PM
that's great!! an awesome poem!! i can't wait till someone steals my :heart:
Beautiful poetry!!

KAY KAY 's photo
Fri 10/26/07 12:33 PM
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tigerman1956's photo
Fri 10/26/07 12:34 PM
WHAT A COOL POEM, THANKS FOR SHARINGflowerforyou flowerforyou

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Fri 10/26/07 12:36 PM
I'm with you on that one mswizardflowerforyou flowerforyou

Amalie's photo
Fri 10/26/07 12:38 PM
flowerforyou :heart:

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Fri 10/26/07 12:40 PM
Thank you cool cats and dolls.....I love sharing my work with you all.....flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart:

Noden's photo
Fri 10/26/07 12:41 PM
Oh, that hurts, such pain devatastion, taking all you have to offer.

:cry:

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Fri 10/26/07 12:49 PM
It can be painful....flowerforyou

geo54's photo
Fri 10/26/07 01:07 PM
niceflowerforyou

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Fri 10/26/07 01:20 PM
POWERFUL AND WELL WRITTEN. MY SENTIMENTS EXACTLY. THANKS FOR WRITING WITH SUCH EMOTION.flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

blonderockermom's photo
Fri 10/26/07 02:09 PM
Very cool mswizard :smile: flowerforyou

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Fri 10/26/07 05:09 PM
"POWERFUL AND WELL WRITTEN. MY SENTIMENTS EXACTLY. THANKS FOR WRITING WITH SUCH EMOTION"


Thank you pkd~I appreciate your comments flowerforyou

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Fri 10/26/07 05:10 PM
"nice"

Geo~flowerforyou

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Fri 10/26/07 05:11 PM
"Very cool mswizard"

Thank you rocker, I always appreciate your comments flowerforyou

p.s. LOVE the Rolling Stone cover you've got up...!!

blonderockermom's photo
Fri 10/26/07 05:17 PM
Ur Welcome...

And yea, Gotta love that cover!!bigsmile flowerforyou


no_psychos_please's photo
Fri 10/26/07 08:11 PM
Damn (((Alicia))) did somebody beat me to it???!!! I was all dressed up in my cat burglar outfit and everything! grumble Oh well ohwell Long as I'm here and all dressed up..... :wink: I'll steal a kiss smooched

:heart: flowerforyou :heart: smooched

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Fri 10/26/07 08:30 PM
"Damn (((Alicia))) did somebody beat me to it???!!! I was all dressed up in my cat burglar outfit and everything! Oh well Long as I'm here and all dressed up..... I'll steal a kiss"

awwwww you can steal into my window anytime honey smooched smooched :heart: flowerforyou


no_psychos_please's photo
Fri 10/26/07 08:43 PM
bigsmile and should I get caught stealing this kiss? :wink:

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Fri 10/26/07 09:04 PM
You do have a flare with that pen of yours!

I truly enjoy how you mold your words to tug on my heart.

:heart: :heart: :heart: blushing :heart:

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