Topic: This Life of Mine
darkangelchidl_69's photo
Wed 10/24/07 03:13 PM
Is it fear I see when I look into these eyes
or it it the hate I have buried inside
To think about what is going on in my head
A chill runs through my spine
I grab onto that fear I feel
Consuming the warmth it holds inside
You wonder if you will know the truth
the truth behind this life of mine
I will tell you now and never more
I've changed so many times before
to face the pains that challenged me
I grasp the things I was before
to accept who I am today
You wonder if you will know the truth
the truth behind this life of mine
I will tell you now and never more
I'll stay the same and change no more.

blonderockermom's photo
Wed 10/24/07 03:14 PM
Really nice :smile:

darkangelchidl_69's photo
Wed 10/24/07 03:22 PM
thanks you should check out my other ones

no photo
Thu 10/25/07 06:16 AM
This has 5 deletes - I just voted to keep, as its in poetry.

For those that would like it deleted, maybe if you provided an explanatory post for why you are deleting it, more people (myself included) migh vote with you.