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Topic: Dancing With Your Devil
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Wed 10/24/07 06:30 AM
I see that look in your eyes

the scent of your fears

linger in the air

I can feel the vibrations

of your hurts, your confusions

the ones you hold so deeply within

...and me? ...

I bang my heart tortuously

against barriers you built

barbed fences you put up

against a hand held

out to you lovingly, in trust..

wont you tear those walls down

open the gates, let me in?

we could slay those dragons together

the ones who encase you,

hold you captive,

embrace you,

and hold you so tight

in your emotional steel jail ...

God, fight for your freedom!

kick away from that demon!

cause death is around the corner

and the time has come

for you to decide.

will you lay with the devil

or a woman who needs you?

will you always be captive

or let someone help free you?

will you dance with your devil

or let yourself run free

and dance ...

... with me?


kojack's photo
Wed 10/24/07 06:39 AM
i'M READY TO DANCE ANYTIME .

Awesome poem, you continue to amaze me sweetie flowerforyou

malibu23wi's photo
Wed 10/24/07 06:40 AM
very nicely written...and sooo true...so many people tend to let their past rule their future, and that will never work...more ppl need to try to let it go and try something new!! ((hugs))

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 10/24/07 06:51 AM
You don't have to slay the drrrragons, you can tame them instead.........

s1owhand's photo
Wed 10/24/07 06:56 AM
give me a rock
and give me a hard place
and i will show you
the lever

bigsmile

...and i mean to pry :wink:

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Wed 10/24/07 07:03 AM
"i'M READY TO DANCE ANYTIME .

Awesome poem, you continue to amaze me sweetie"

Awww Thank you~:heart:

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Wed 10/24/07 07:04 AM
"very nicely written...and sooo true...so many people tend to let their past rule their future, and that will never work...more ppl need to try to let it go and try something new!! ((hugs))"

Thank you for your words Malibu, and yes its true, we shouldnt hang onto some things in our lives! ((hugs))

p.s. Are you in Malibu? And are you ok?

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Wed 10/24/07 07:04 AM
"You don't have to slay the drrrragons, you can tame them instead........."

<<------has big whip...grin...flowerforyou

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Wed 10/24/07 07:05 AM
"give me a rock
and give me a hard place
and i will show you
the lever

...and i mean to pry "

hahahahaha...nice wording there s1owhand....*smiling* flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Wed 10/24/07 07:12 AM
:tongue: flowerforyou

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Wed 10/24/07 07:16 AM
I'd rather not slay them nor tame them, simply I would rather just be the dragon and eat the damned devil.

malibu23wi's photo
Wed 10/24/07 07:18 AM
I'm not in malibu...just a nick name i've had for a long time...someone i used to work with gave it to me...because my real name is Stacy, so the whole Malibu Stacy thing from the Simpson's...

but my :heart: goes out to all those that are in Malibu, i've been there before and it is a very beautiful place, and i'm sure it will be again in time after the fires

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 10/24/07 07:20 AM
laugh laugh Go poet!!!

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 10/24/07 08:51 AM
Dance!!!

happy flowerforyou

no_psychos_please's photo
Wed 10/24/07 11:04 AM
You have a VIP pass here sweetie! No dance card needed, just a wish, and we'll dance :wink:

(((Alicia))) flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou smooched

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Wed 10/24/07 02:05 PM
<<---her mouth opens to sing as she whirls, twirls, eyes closed, rejoicing under the moon and stars~


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Wed 10/24/07 07:00 PM
"Dance!!!"

Dance with me then MsTeddy! Let's spin and twirl!!!

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Sun 10/28/07 08:25 AM
"You have a VIP pass here sweetie! No dance card needed, just a wish, and we'll dance"

Then get those dancing shoes on Mister!

:heart: flowerforyou :heart:


no_psychos_please's photo
Sun 10/28/07 09:18 AM
For you..... My dancin shoes are always on sweetie! I may not be the best dancer, but I would always take you out on the floor drinker smooched flowerforyou :heart:

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Sun 10/28/07 09:22 AM
Wow......looked right into my soul......

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