Topic: Butterfly
Tygrr's photo
Tue 10/23/07 09:19 PM
Butterfly

I saw you first,
on a summer's day
You fluttered by,
without delay
To work to work,
you had to be
Does she work,
here with me?

I knew you were special,
right away
Your love of life,
eclipsed the day
Drawn to you,
like a moth to a fire
Visions of you,
brought me desire

I made my first move,
in the walk-in cooler
That pickup line,
should have got me no further
From that,
our friendship grew
It wasn't soon,
until I fell in love with you

My love for you,
is growing strong
If I kept you,
would that be so wrong?
My love for you,
is bitter sweet
You can't give,
what I can't keep

Flutterby Butterfly,
I want to keep you near by
But with that,
you would wither and die
My love for you,
lives till this day
So flutterby Butterfly,
flutter away...
Until the next time you,
...flutterby my way

Ty R.

LAMom's photo
Wed 10/24/07 01:40 AM
Beautiful flowerforyou flowerforyou

BonnyMiss's photo
Wed 10/24/07 01:56 AM
Very good work, I love the flow of your words and the use of a butterfly as a symbol to tell your story of a tender, delicate love. Wonderful flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 10/24/07 09:00 AM
flowerforyou very nice...

no photo
Wed 10/24/07 10:40 AM
awwww....i so like poems about butterflies...ellusive creatures they can be.bigsmile

blonderockermom's photo
Wed 10/24/07 10:41 AM
Very beautiful:smile: flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 10/24/07 01:18 PM
Awesome loved it bigsmile flowerforyou