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flowers to knowledge may we bloom
in our little flower beds making room room to grow we spread our roots displaying proudly our little shoots watch them grow as the seasons change others come arround to rearrange our bouquet of beauty weve come to know others as harsh as the driven snow taking from us the things they have not plucking the life from our flower pot so we replant in hopes of springs return to grow stronger from the lessons learned. i wrote this one day as i watched the smallest of flowers spring out from the tombs.... |
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i like....simple yet pretty
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Another excellent piece..inspirational as well. Keep planting...
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boy i can say both of you grased the content exactly as i meant it thank you all
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the point of poetry is not reveal all but yet leave enough for the reader to think to figure out the rest
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i just try to get my thoughts out to whomever might enjoy them im glad you found some you like
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