Topic: the fragile flowers
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Mon 10/22/07 10:09 PM
flowers to knowledge may we bloom
in our little flower beds making room
room to grow we spread our roots
displaying proudly our little shoots

watch them grow as the seasons change
others come arround to rearrange
our bouquet of beauty weve come to know
others as harsh as the driven snow

taking from us the things they have not
plucking the life from our flower pot
so we replant in hopes of springs return
to grow stronger from the lessons learned.


i wrote this one day as i watched the smallest of
flowers spring out from the tombs....


LAMom's photo
Tue 10/23/07 12:16 AM
flowerforyou

danni08032006's photo
Tue 10/23/07 12:42 AM
i like....simple yet pretty

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Tue 10/23/07 12:48 AM
Another excellent piece..inspirational as well. Keep planting...

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Tue 10/23/07 12:57 AM
boy i can say both of you grased the content exactly as i meant it thank you all

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Tue 10/23/07 01:02 AM
the point of poetry is not reveal all but yet leave enough for the reader to think to figure out the rest

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Tue 10/23/07 01:05 AM
i just try to get my thoughts out to whomever might enjoy them im glad you found some you like