Topic: Nice Guys
KAL's photo
Thu 11/02/06 02:09 PM

I can’t be an ass,
it’s not in my heart.
You want a real man,
one set apart.

I’m not rich or tall,
conceded or rude.
Probably not the best looking,
just a normal dude.

My appearance means nothing,
not as bad ass as I seem.
If you took a chance,
would you see what I mean?

Mind, body and soul,
they don’t always agree.
Flesh, spirit and thoughts,
Always tugging at me.

I know who I am,
a Prince, a Pauper, maybe a Geek!
I’m true to myself,
am I what it is you seek?

You’ve been beaten and battered,
broken and abused,
The lies and the troubles,
you don’t deserve.

I’m a victim of a pure heart,
your love I won’t cast,
Can someone please tell me,
why is it nice guys finish last?

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 02:12 PM
man we need you at th duel of poets!!!

escapedlunatic's photo
Thu 11/02/06 02:13 PM
Very wonderfull expression ...dude your right on!

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 11/04/06 06:06 AM
Very nice, keep up the good work.

no photo
Sat 11/04/06 06:36 AM
KAL
Well said it really touched my heart,I felt your pain will reading it's
sad but yet so very true for most people.Your a very nice looking man
and I can tell by reading your post that your heart is full of
love,caring,someone who deserves you will come along maybe not on this
site but it'll happen!!

VenusianWoman's photo
Thu 11/09/06 08:44 AM
Many,Im sure can relate to this.We know who we are inside, but it takes
certain people, special ones,to figure out for themselves who the other
one is inside.

To bad so many have to go thru crappy relationships to find the right
one eh.

Enjoyed your poems!