Topic: For A Moment
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Sat 10/20/07 03:23 PM
Across the crowded room
I see you,standing,searching
As if you have lost something
Or someone

The missing piece
Has left you confused
Unable to function
Unsure of yourself

Without it you are paralyzed
Nothing else matters
Nothing in your life exists
Without this piece

Oh that I could be
That missing piece
That part of you which
Without, you are helpless

That I could fill somehow
That lonely void in your soul
To overflow your heart with love
and complete your being

But alas, I am but a stranger
wondering and watching you from afar
Yet somehow I know that you
could fill the void in me

As quickly as I saw you
You are gone
Your way and I mine
Yet, for a moment
My heart was full









blonderockermom's photo
Sat 10/20/07 03:26 PM
Very nice ghostrider:smile: flowerforyou

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Sat 10/20/07 03:34 PM
nice !!

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Sat 10/20/07 04:00 PM
A beautiful moment in time...though brief so very well worth it. Wonderfully expressed, and welcome to the poetry forum.Looking forward to reading more of you.

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Sat 10/20/07 04:04 PM
TY all very much

JodieAnn11's photo
Sat 10/20/07 04:15 PM
absolutely wonderful!

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Sun 10/21/07 06:04 AM
TY Jodie

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Sat 01/05/08 10:32 AM
Ghost this was beautiful, how we look at the view wondering if this is someone, that we could share in a life of newflowerforyou flowerforyou smokin

LAMom's photo
Sat 01/05/08 10:36 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou beautiful