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Topic: Sweet Surrender
Jimi366 Joined Fri 09/15/06 Posts: 672	Wed 11/01/06 12:58 PM
I woke up this morning in your arms and I felt complete again. I hurt so much and felt so lost I was at my lowest then you took my hand and healed me with a kiss. I was like a wounded animal. You put the human back in me. Baby you took my world and changed it. You wiped my tears away so I could see. You made love to me when everyone had walked away. Sweet surrender to you baby is more than I could ever ask for. ....sweet surrender

Angelo42 Joined Wed 09/27/06 Posts: 157	Wed 11/01/06 01:01 PM
WOW THAT'S A GOOD POEM!!!

Jimi366 Joined Fri 09/15/06 Posts: 672	Wed 11/01/06 01:20 PM
Thank you.

Angelo42 Joined Wed 09/27/06 Posts: 157	Wed 11/01/06 01:23 PM
DO YOU HAVE ANOTHER?

Jimi366 Joined Fri 09/15/06 Posts: 672	Wed 11/01/06 01:31 PM
I have plenty. Once my home computer is back up I will be able to post more. Right now I'm posting at work so I'm basically sneaking the time.

Angelo42 Joined Wed 09/27/06 Posts: 157	Wed 11/01/06 01:34 PM
HEY WOULD YOU LIKE TO BE MY FRIEND

escapedlunatic Joined Mon 10/16/06 Posts: 1431	Wed 11/01/06 01:35 PM
good writing man!

Angelo42 Joined Wed 09/27/06 Posts: 157	Wed 11/01/06 01:48 PM
HEY YOU HAVE ANOTHER GOOD PERSON GIVING YOU A NICE COMPLIMENT!

Opalescence Joined Wed 11/01/06 Posts: 5	Wed 11/01/06 02:13 PM
Very nice poem!

SWEETLATIN12 Joined Fri 10/27/06 Posts: 14	Wed 11/01/06 02:42 PM
ey not bad dude womans really like that?

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Wed 11/01/06 02:46 PM
good work "Jimi", felt it too,glad to see you keepin' on,,,

tretia Joined Tue 09/12/06 Posts: 183	Wed 11/01/06 06:57 PM
very pretty, jimi..miss u!

sweetcountrygirl Joined Tue 10/03/06 Posts: 2463	Wed 11/01/06 07:02 PM
Hey Jimi Everyone should have "sweet surrender'... very nice...Loved it! Glad tohear from you once again!

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