what if in that moment of time
you could be made to stop and think
of us, her, them, and of him
would it change the outcome?

what if in that space of time
you could see what it would do to me
how it would change her
what it would do to them
what life would be like for him
would you put that gun down?

what if in a fraction of time
you could witness the pain
see the tears spill down
feel the crushing pain
watch the agony
would you flush those pills instead?

what if in that heartbeat or less
you saw the future without you
how long my heart would hurt
how she'd never find another
how different they'd carry on
how he'd never be a brother
would you slow that car down?

What if for that moment of time
you could see, feel, and hear
what it would be like to be us
would it turn your life around
just enough
to keep from putting you in the ground?

very good write

Wow that was really good...so many what if's in life but the past is gone and tomorrow is not here so live for today

If only they could see...

Very good- very good!

Yes your right MsTeddyBear2u.. if only they could see. Thank you.


Thank you pkh.

And you too shadow_princess

I agree this is not only a very goo write but it also makes a lot of sense. Thanks for posting this

Alot of times people don't see what effects their actions have on the people who love them...how sad that is...thanks for sharing

Your right blonderockermom, wouldn't it be nice to think enough to see before we do things! And thanks for reading it.

Thanks for reading it ObscureLight

and thank you too ChelleBelle