The sunlight that once fed my leaves,
in a twist of fate - dehydrates me.
Love is wilting and I`m dieing -
by degrees.

The drops we cry,
provide the rain.
To a vase that knows it cant sustain.
There's nothing left, save for,
the desert of loves - remains.

Your cracked vase lets the water by,
my roots can`t drink.
And soon will die.
Another love turned to dust.
Another vase consumed by rust.

The crimson light escapes from me,
dripping, falling endlessly.
To a bottom that it never finds,
leaving nothing, not even a seed behind.

Your cracked vase lets the water by,
my roots can`t drink and soon will die.
Holding on to loves sweet song.
Once again I sing alone.

kc07

dying sorry

please delete me

wow i just had a chance to read the poem that was here and wow its a nice one

You can't die or be deleted my friend. It would be a devastating blow to the poetry threads, not to mention a huge waste in talent.

I cant spell either lol sorry everyone...
Thank you ol

lilwren..I appreciate you stopping to say that

The more i read your soul I sit in Awe of you my friend,,,

Hugs

ty mom
you rock!!!

I guess I should proof read before I post though

Awwwwwwww pfffffffffff kc as ya know it is funny how some worry about the spelling what is funny evenattimes a few words get misspelled and sooooooooooooo.

We did not come in here to talk about your spelling and if you have noticed that no where in the poetry section do we have drama seekers. For in here drama is put into a poem not harsh words.

By the way it is a good poem

tg3333
thank you

very intense, and quite beautiful kc

ty mom
Its a little different style for me but, I thought I would give it a try.

once again...simple and with raw emotion.
give that girl some glue she is missing out on a beautiful soul.

Nice poem...

meandu2...you two are the best..."glue" lol

Mrst bear... thank you much

kc...it's always fun to try new styles of writing, tinker with them...this is beautifully written, and if you didn't point out the misspell, i probably wouldn't even have noticed it


good job.

ty jb

wow

this spun off in a million ways

thanks for sharing

there was a vessel that'd rather crack and break than than be held by hands placed on a mantle housed with sin