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Topic: Will you guys please check me out?
thegreatmatty58401's photo
Wed 09/23/15 12:54 AM
Hello, I am new here. Would someone please check out my Profile. Tell me what you think, and if I would even be dateable? Thanks Everyone!

Fest2k's photo
Wed 09/23/15 01:03 AM
I think evryone Is dateble that includes you bro

thegreatmatty58401's photo
Wed 09/23/15 01:08 AM

I think evryone Is dateble that includes you bro


Haha, well thanks. but I mean more looks, size and personality.

no photo
Wed 09/23/15 02:16 AM
Thumbs up. More pics are better though.
I would ditch the speel about obese women though.
Good luck

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Wed 09/23/15 02:32 AM
waving Mathew aka Matty

WELCOME TO THE ZOO happy

Your pic album is great. Maybe a few similar pics that may be unnecessary perhaps

You're so tall!!! May i see some of ur body art?

Your profile works for you
It is clear to understand what kinda gal ure looking for, ur honesty is a good trait, so that will be in ur favour

All the best of luck in finding what ure looking for

Sincerely
Kittycat
LIFE
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 09/23/15 02:34 AM


I would ditch the speel about obese women though.
Good luck


I quite agree. Although ure honest here, it may and will hurt some people's feelings and that is never good

thegreatmatty58401's photo
Wed 09/23/15 03:55 AM

Thumbs up. More pics are better though.
I would ditch the speel about obese women though.
Good luck


Thank you for your input. I shall work on it some more when I wake up.

thegreatmatty58401's photo
Wed 09/23/15 03:57 AM

waving Mathew aka Matty

WELCOME TO THE ZOO happy

Your pic album is great. Maybe a few similar pics that may be unnecessary perhaps

You're so tall!!! May i see some of ur body art?

Your profile works for you
It is clear to understand what kinda gal ure looking for, ur honesty is a good trait, so that will be in ur favour

All the best of luck in finding what ure looking for

Sincerely
Kittycat
LIFE
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


Thank you! I will work on some of it later, and you most certainly can see some of my work. I refuse to show one, because I don't like it and plan on covering it. however, tomorrow I will as some pictures of the other, and ill reply on here when I do!

no photo
Wed 09/23/15 04:06 AM
jolly good!

Dodo_David's photo
Wed 09/23/15 04:22 AM
"Will you guys please check me out?"

You have to get in line with the rest of the customers.indifferent


thegreatmatty58401's photo
Wed 09/23/15 04:26 AM

jolly good!


I had a few minutes before I needed to get to bed. I uploaded the only picture of any of my tattoos I could find, also added a few, in an attempt to show my personality through pictures.

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Wed 09/23/15 04:29 AM


jolly good!


I had a few minutes before I needed to get to bed. I uploaded the only picture of any of my tattoos I could find, also added a few, in an attempt to show my personality through pictures.


hang on i'll go look

no photo
Wed 09/23/15 04:30 AM
seen

not bad

sweet dreams Mathew

waving waving waving

thegreatmatty58401's photo
Wed 09/23/15 04:32 AM

seen

not bad

sweet dreams Mathew

waving waving waving


I have also updated the about me novel I have wrote.

Thank you again, Have a great night, or day... I don't even know what it is anymore. haha

no photo
Wed 09/23/15 04:33 AM
it's Eid Al Adha tonight Matty

Celebration time

SitkaRains's photo
Wed 09/23/15 09:40 AM

Hello, I am new here. Would someone please check out my Profile. Tell me what you think, and if I would even be dateable? Thanks Everyone!

First Welcome to Mingle...
I believe everyone is dateable just need to find the right one!!!

I enjoyed your profile very much, I see strong family values, directness.


Now the only thing I would do a bit different is break up your thoughts a bit with paragraphs. It will make it an easier read.
Heck that is the only negative thing I could think to say.

I also see a fellow NFL Fan how about that game against the Seahawks.. Great game right???

Again welcome to Mingle
and best wishes in you searchflowerforyou

SparklingCrystal 💖💎's photo
Wed 09/23/15 10:00 AM
Indeed a great profile, well written. A few remarks:
- Most of your photos are really dark, including your profile picture. Get piccies that are lighter (and thus clearer). There's a few in there, us one of those as a profile pic if you want to hang on to the dark ones

- You are a funny guy, yet you don't like your own smile? Someone that does smile is far more appealing than someone who casts a sinister look in the camera. That may be okay for you, but you're trying to flog yourself here, so you got to cater for what your 'clients' want to see.

- Photos of a man with other women generally speaking don't go down too well. I don't need to see you having fun with an ex (she should be in the past). I know.. probably not your ex, but that's the first thing that comes to mind.

- Photos with another guy are not handy either. How are we to know which one of the lot is you? YOU know, but we don't.

- THe part where you tell you like to party, but intend to settle down ... Maybe rephrase that a tad.
Right now when I read "I like to party..." I'm off (unless there's something else really appealing that makes me want to read on. But in general people don't peruse at first, but tend to skim).
I don't want a party animal (and from what you say you don't either), but the start of that section gives the impression you are...
If you'd say "As a single I like to ..." or "As long as I'm single ..."

But of course entirely up to you.

Last point is what Sitka said: for goodness sake use paragraphs!! Now it's one big block of text. Not appealing, nor handy, to read.

And for crissake use the smiling picture, lol

Good luck
flowerforyou

thegreatmatty58401's photo
Thu 09/24/15 01:17 PM


Hello, I am new here. Would someone please check out my Profile. Tell me what you think, and if I would even be dateable? Thanks Everyone!

First Welcome to Mingle...
I believe everyone is dateable just need to find the right one!!!

I enjoyed your profile very much, I see strong family values, directness.


Now the only thing I would do a bit different is break up your thoughts a bit with paragraphs. It will make it an easier read.
Heck that is the only negative thing I could think to say.

I also see a fellow NFL Fan how about that game against the Seahawks.. Great game right???

Again welcome to Mingle
and best wishes in you searchflowerforyou



Thank you for your feedback! I will look into y pofile and see what I can do to fix it up just that much more.

ad yes it was actually a good game, finally we got the best of Seattle haha.

thegreatmatty58401's photo
Thu 09/24/15 01:20 PM

Indeed a great profile, well written. A few remarks:
- Most of your photos are really dark, including your profile picture. Get piccies that are lighter (and thus clearer). There's a few in there, us one of those as a profile pic if you want to hang on to the dark ones

- You are a funny guy, yet you don't like your own smile? Someone that does smile is far more appealing than someone who casts a sinister look in the camera. That may be okay for you, but you're trying to flog yourself here, so you got to cater for what your 'clients' want to see.

- Photos of a man with other women generally speaking don't go down too well. I don't need to see you having fun with an ex (she should be in the past). I know.. probably not your ex, but that's the first thing that comes to mind.

- Photos with another guy are not handy either. How are we to know which one of the lot is you? YOU know, but we don't.

- THe part where you tell you like to party, but intend to settle down ... Maybe rephrase that a tad.
Right now when I read "I like to party..." I'm off (unless there's something else really appealing that makes me want to read on. But in general people don't peruse at first, but tend to skim).
I don't want a party animal (and from what you say you don't either), but the start of that section gives the impression you are...
If you'd say "As a single I like to ..." or "As long as I'm single ..."

But of course entirely up to you.

Last point is what Sitka said: for goodness sake use paragraphs!! Now it's one big block of text. Not appealing, nor handy, to read.

And for crissake use the smiling picture, lol

Good luck
flowerforyou


Thank you! I am getting the impression, that I may be the only person who doesn't like my smile. lol

TrystaBella85's photo
Thu 09/24/15 03:34 PM
Everyone likes a smile, if makes your face look better.happy

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