Topic: Buried Alive
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Mon 10/15/07 04:17 PM
Bury me alive
Push me into that six foot deep hole
Let the earth sprinkle across my brow
Covering my nose
Filling my mouth
As I silently scream
Shovel full after shovel full
Cascading upon my writhing body
As my screams go unheard
Except for in my head
And as I writhe the earth covering me shifts
Packing more solidly around me
No longer can I see
No longer can I breath
Lungs aching, screaming in protest
As my hands feebly claw at the dirt
Muffled the sounds of you above are now
I cannot even hear the dirt hitting the hole
And silently I scream
Bury me alive....

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Mon 10/15/07 05:11 PM
Ok CCP
Once again you dazzle the screen with your words, although I must admit that this is a bit over my head
No offense but do you think I could get a translation please?

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Mon 10/15/07 05:13 PM
Sure OL, glad someone asked, never am I offended when someone asks for an explanation. I am being buried alive , literally ,by everything in my head...simply wishing that it was easier and easier means dead..but the silent screams are the desire not to die.

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Mon 10/15/07 05:15 PM
Thanks CCP for putting it in perspective for me
It makes total sense to me now and I can so relate

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Mon 10/15/07 05:15 PM
Now that is dark. I think I will just be put in a mosaleum now just in case I'm not really dead.

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Mon 10/15/07 05:16 PM
Amazing read jenniflowerforyou