I'm drowning
without you.
I drift into
a bottomless sea.
I'm drowning,
I need your love.
Baby take me to
that Heavenly place
that's high above
the lifeless life
that I'm living.
I need you.
I need you so bad.
Your words bring me
happiness, their absense
makes me sad. That's
why I'm drowning.
Please don't leave me,
don't leave me all alone.
A poet without no words,
a song that has no notes,
is where I find myself
without you.

Please check out www.soulsgate.com
and please poets and fellow writers
please write there. I feel so bummed right now.
I'm afraid my dream is dying because there
have been no posts in awhile.

WOW THAT'S SAD AND A GOOD POEM!!!

Thanks

i have recently lost my wife and have been reading a lot and i do meen a lot of peeps writings thankyou for all your work it really does help

sorry to hear, some great writes here, may you find comfort and peace.

HEY JIMI,,,,dude,,its been awhile,,Its GREAT to read you here again and this Poem of yours is really heart felt. and Known to my own.

I'll check out your place,,and I hope life starts looking brighter for you..ITS NOT EASY,,,but it is Living....Be safe and Blessed.

And KEEP ON WRITING THESE MAN...