Topic: Them
BlackWidow8511's photo
Mon 10/30/06 10:19 AM
Crawling
Falling
Struggling
The devils trying to take me away
With him he wants me to stay
Tired, confuzed
Feeling abuzed
Nothing seems to make sense anymore
Seems like everything went out the door
Trying to run away
Everythings telling me to stay
Can I keep the demons at bay
Cause they don't seem to want me to stay
fucking up my day
In my head they stay
Telling me what to say

BlackWidow8511's photo
Tue 10/31/06 09:08 AM
Hello, anybody there?

michael1313's photo
Tue 10/31/06 09:24 AM
awww did somebody break yer smurffett lil girl???

BlackWidow8511's photo
Wed 11/01/06 10:02 AM
What the fuck does that mean?
Asshole

michael1313's photo
Wed 11/01/06 10:06 AM
hey,,,slow th f**k down,,,I was only askin if you were ok now ,,,but you
feel th needs to be hostile with me so........*

BlackWidow8511's photo
Wed 11/01/06 10:08 AM
no, just didn't now what you were implying
sorry

michael1313's photo
Wed 11/01/06 10:09 AM
nothing implied ...what were you thinking?

Jimi366's photo
Wed 11/01/06 10:12 AM
What you wrote is packed with emotion.
I know exactly how you felt when you wrote this.
I too have demons I am fighting to keep at bay.
The good life always seems just a little out
of reach sometimes. I really like what
you wrote.

BlackWidow8511's photo
Wed 11/01/06 10:15 AM
To michael
YOur dumb
Thanks, Jimi

BlackWidow8511's photo
Wed 11/01/06 10:15 AM
To michael
YOur dumb
Thanks, Jimi

michael1313's photo
Wed 11/01/06 10:20 AM
I speak quite well thank you...as far as "Dumb???Hardly....

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Wed 11/01/06 10:21 AM
ok ok this is the poetry forum not UFC unleashed take that to I like
Fish lol

BlackWidow8511's photo
Wed 11/01/06 10:22 AM
Whatever
Don't really care

BlackWidow8511's photo
Tue 11/07/06 10:09 AM
Anybody have any opinions???

no photo
Tue 11/07/06 10:13 AM
JUST RELAX AND ENJOY YOUR LIFE...

BlackWidow8511's photo
Tue 11/07/06 10:30 AM
Thats what I'm trying to do!!!

michael1313's photo
Tue 11/07/06 11:09 AM
no offense was intended...,
insults not mended,
my heart rings true,
but no words for you,
are pretended,
your rhyme was fine,
in yer sweet time,
you have contended,
my heart now is mended,
Thank You.

no photo
Tue 11/07/06 02:56 PM
That was really good widow.>WILL