Just seeing if I can improve it.

I thought your blurb about yourself was very well written. You seem like the genuine kind of guy that women like. Hope you find your down to earth, quirky girl you're looking for. Your profile pic is nice too, no posiness there, and a nice smile, though the image is a wee bit blurry and dark, so ladies will have to squint at it a few minutes longer to see you, but I know it's hard to get a good shot sometimes (I always end up blinking at the wrong moment myself). Hope the feedback was helpful.

Hi fellow Alaskan.. Now that you are here that makes 4 of us that I know of Yeah...

Profile looks great, I would add some more pictures as you go...
Welcome to the site