Can anyone tell me what's wrong with my profile please.

Hi, that first sentence is too aggressive as an opening....
Its okay that you feel that way...your not alone there.....
But I would put it at the end....
your spiel is nice, don't let your dislikes overrule your profile.....

Welcome and good luck...

what mikie said,,but really its a good profile, great pics of you,,
better thin most ive viewed,,

I have to agree with Mikey on this one..
I get what you are saying... How about rewording it a bit.
As I am the mother of three awesome children I am not into the cyber sex thang. So when contacting please refer to something in my interests or profile outside of the pictures .

I am sure you can word it much better than I am here... But you kind of get my drift...

Also to be honest I have only gotten maybe a handful of emails that weren't on the up and up sexually in all the years I have been playing on the forums.

Welcome to Mingle Good luck out here

Thank you

take the I hate lies part off

you are an intelligent woman
you will know if what they say is honest

Great profile you look amazing in all your pics hope you find what your looking for good luck welcome to mingles.

Good point ty

Well, it's very personal... but it sounds like you're looking for a daddy for your kids so you can have family fun.
If that's what you're looking for, fair enough. If you're looking for a partner who is willing to date a single mom, I'd seriously rephrase the whole lot. You can still add that you have kids and that they mean a lot to you, but don't go overboard on that. It's quite self-explanatory that a parent loves her/his kids and that they are nr. 1

Tell something about yourself first, since YOU are the one a man has to be attracted to, not your kids.
You state that you like to be silly and elaborate on that, but again it's about you and your kids ...
Do you have a life of your own apart from your kids? Do you have time to have a life of your own, apart from your kids? Are you willing to create time for yourself? As in, time to get to know a guy, date him. Or would you make the meet and greet a family outing as well?

You see my point here? A man is generally looking for a woman, not a family. So give them the woman.

Good luck

There is nothing wrong with your profile.

We live to far apart, but if you lived closer to me the fact that you play online poker would have made me write you.

Perhaps a erotic hint would help, for example you like to kiss/hug, bedroom is hobbyroom when in a relation etc. This would be very motivating for a man.
I think you know how men are, we can't help it.

Also on Pokerstars by the way?

i guess i missed the first draft it looks good to me now.

good luck

Looks great, positive and sweet. Good luck!

Hi gal. What do u think is wrong? I think it's clear.