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Topic: A Brief Hello
JLaDawn Joined Mon 03/09/15 Posts: 65	Fri 03/20/15 09:34 PM
Our hearts enter this world reaching Friends and lovers move in and take a seat Every connection precious and unique Teaching and learning.....seeking... Some stay awhile aquiring and bestowing For just a moment our hearts intertwine Love is found but not fulfilled And some come for just a visit Not knowing that love is rooting We meet and our hearts reach Both hold on...a recognition growing A brief hello becomes an echo neverending

Astrid Joined Tue 03/25/14 Posts: 7748	Fri 03/20/15 11:21 PM
nice write...

JLaDawn Joined Mon 03/09/15 Posts: 65	Sat 03/21/15 03:01 PM
nice write... Thank you so much Astrid...I am glad you liked it.

joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Sat 03/21/15 03:05 PM
Shakespeare himself would be touched by that. very nice

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Sat 03/21/15 03:14 PM
I love it..

HukamKhan Joined Sat 03/21/15 Posts: 6	Sat 03/21/15 03:14 PM
Outstanding

HukamKhan Joined Sat 03/21/15 Posts: 6	Sat 03/21/15 03:15 PM
nice write... Thank you so much Astrid...I am glad you liked it.

mikey5360 Joined Wed 04/23/14 Posts: 26096	Sat 03/21/15 03:52 PM
Nice.... If that was brief I'd hate to see a long post...hehe..

JLaDawn Joined Mon 03/09/15 Posts: 65	Sat 03/21/15 07:17 PM
Shakespeare himself would be touched by that. very nice Thank you for those words...very much.

JLaDawn Joined Mon 03/09/15 Posts: 65	Sat 03/21/15 07:19 PM Edited by JLaDawn on Sat 03/21/15 07:19 PM
Thank you rosemary, hukam and mikey!

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sat 03/21/15 07:35 PM
Nice

Godistheanswer Joined Mon 02/02/15 Posts: 477	Tue 03/24/15 02:50 PM
like looking at the Grand Canyon in the morning, so many hues of beauty and thought.

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