Topic: a song type thing... well lyrics
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Fri 10/05/07 06:00 PM
i wrote his song, felt really strongly about it. felt it was the right place to put it. don't really share my stuff, but for some reason i felt like putting my heart on display...


'broken and used up'

Life, so unkind, unrelenting pain
where you seek just for understanding
you look back, the stuff of movies
The pain, the loss, unescapable

Your soul burns away, into ashes
Heart scared, broken and jaded
Wanting to belive as a child once did
You gave up praying everynight long ago

Give your heart to me
if only for one day
let me heal it
so that your ok

You never learned to let go
Somethings can't be undone
He may of hurt you
but your the one on the run

Your eyes full of fear
your heart torn away
i'll take you away from there
if only for a day

Give your heart to me
if only for one day
let me heal it
let me take the pain away

So afraid to trust
And you must
can't let go
just lost control
Every aspect of your pain
and the feelings that came
never thought you where insane
dancing naked in the rain
let me take it away
if just for one day

You can fight it
you can try to hide it
in the end i've always known
to afraid to be alone

I'll take you to places no one knows
Give you something no one had
make you forget all the bad
take my hand, trust me, let go

Let me heal your soul
the one know one knows
He can't hurt you anymore
let your heart open the door

All i ask of you
take my heart
let go never, and i'll
i'll be happy forever

Smiles2b4U's photo
Fri 10/05/07 06:10 PM
Great song, would love to hear the music as I am a fellow writer of poems and songs myself! flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Fri 10/05/07 06:15 PM
mmmm, nice.....some of us are born to only touch briefly, firefly kiss to you.........