Topic: Sounds of Solitude
technovative's photo
Sun 02/15/15 04:01 AM
Sharp crunch of crisp corn kites
Flying from cold digits
Descending into an abysmal cavern
Landing on a supple moist red carpet runway
Pierced by stalactites & stalagmites of ivory

Dull chatter from labeled squares of plastic
Clumsy flutter of impacts
Fall from the tips of cold digits
Launching lofty constructs aloft
Seldom soaring from the supple moist red carpet runway

Tinny trickle of ebony elixir
Steaming hot fluid chilled by dead air
Cascading over a cherry red hill
Staining the spires of ivory
Streaming down the abysmal cavern

Echoes bounce off six surfaces
Hanging in the dead air
Filled by accumulated distractions
Cold digits tremble for the warmth of matching numbers
Cherry red hill quakes to be kissed
Abysmal cavern gasps for the caress of sweet breezes
Aspiration to resurrect the dead air

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Sun 02/15/15 06:34 AM
Hi (((Techno)))flowerforyou ...Cold digits = smart phones = disconnect???...

technovative's photo
Mon 02/16/15 01:35 AM

Hi (((Techno)))flowerforyou ...Cold digits = smart phones = disconnect???...


waving (((Leigh)))

cold digits = my cold fingers
crisp corn kites = tortilla chips
moist supple red carpet runway = my tongue
stalactites & stalagmites/spires of ivory = my teeth
labeled squares of plastic = computer keyboard keys
abysmal cavern = my mouth/throat
ebony elixir = coffee
cherry red hill = my lower lip
six surfaces hanging in dead air = the floor ceiling and walls of a room
matching numbers = a hand to hold
sweet breezes = the breath of a lover

mowildflower's photo
Mon 02/16/15 01:56 AM
Thanks for the insight, now I see... glasses

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Mon 02/16/15 10:09 PM


Yeah got it first time reading I think it's great.
make sure you brush those stalactites and stalagmites of yours ..

:smile:

technovative's photo
Mon 02/16/15 10:34 PM

Thanks for the insight, now I see... glasses


You betcha. Thanks for reading. :smile:


Yeah got it first time reading I think it's great.
make sure you brush those stalactites and stalagmites of yours ..

:smile:


Good on you... you must have one of my secret decoder rings. I appreciate you taking the time to read it, and I'm pleased you like it.

No worries, I scrub my ivory spires at least once a month... whether I need to or not. bigsmile