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Topic: On the topic of love...
Pansytilly Joined Mon 06/09/14 Posts: 11310	Sat 02/14/15 12:03 AM
Love is giving yourself completely & putting your life on the line & giving all of you in everyway & countless sacrifices only to get screwed in return . . But if you don't put yourself out there 100% and take that risk you will never fully experience the joy and pleasure of a true love and pure love.... thats true mikey but i'be had more then enough encounters regarding love to know it sucks imo....nobody will ever love me & i don't care about it & i doubt if i will ever love again but im happier not being in love.... Mate that exactly how I felt when I came here, I was gonna give up, I was after IEs only, until I opened myself to the friendships I have now, those friendships made me realise that finding real love was worth one last shot.....and look at me now..... I'm happy for u mate ....but i guess i wouldn't want to be involved with love again....it really f**ks One up....ive had experiences before but my last was the greatest heartache ever.... . never say never... it's beautiful Pansy... Thanks mekay Happy hearts day to you

thinhmingle7 Joined Mon 01/05/15 Posts: 8	Sat 02/14/15 12:09 AM
Oh, such a nice topic

Pansytilly Joined Mon 06/09/14 Posts: 11310	Sat 02/14/15 12:13 AM
Fk love I've been kicking around that ^^^^ as a title for a song I want to write. As for the poem, that is brilliantly written. Thank you ((maddog)) your post is very good also My idea of "Fk love" as a song might sound a bit like this >>> <self-fulfilling prophecy>

thinhmingle7 Joined Mon 01/05/15 Posts: 8	Sat 02/14/15 12:18 AM
I like this topic

Foursure Joined Fri 01/09/15 Posts: 3231	Sat 02/14/15 12:20 AM
can understand how unknown romeo feels ... when you have given it everything, at the end you are shrivelled and used up, depleted. I feel like Love is an illusion we talk ourselves into. I don't begrudge those that feel they have found it as I remember that feeling and it is wonderful.

TinTerrific Joined Fri 02/13/15 Posts: 2	Sat 02/14/15 12:37 AM
Very nice poem

thelastmanonearth Joined Sat 04/26/14 Posts: 4	Sat 02/14/15 01:33 AM Edited by thelastmanonearth on Sat 02/14/15 01:35 AM
Nice writing Pansytilly I put some thoughts together too. "About love" Some days it grows inside my heart Sometimes it leaves me all alone I'��ve used it I'��ve heard it Some people are fond of it Other people can’t stand it We have taken care of it It can be misjudged It had been misunderstood It'��s been used extremely wrong You can blame it It still doesn'��t complain about us What we have done or haven'��t done You can'��t own it It'��s a short word Very powerful word It�'s my shelter and my shield That word is your key It'��s the key to my door It will guide your words to my heart The famous little word

Pansytilly Joined Mon 06/09/14 Posts: 11310	Sat 02/14/15 07:43 AM
can understand how unknown romeo feels ... when you have given it everything, at the end you are shrivelled and used up, depleted. I feel like Love is an illusion we talk ourselves into. I don't begrudge those that feel they have found it as I remember that feeling and it is wonderful. Yes, sometimes we get so tired of chasing after something that doesn't seem forthcoming... But then again, chasing after our projected image of what love is, can't really be all that fulfilling... Live and learn... we can always aspire for it, yes?

Pansytilly Joined Mon 06/09/14 Posts: 11310	Sat 02/14/15 07:45 AM
Thank you ((TinTerrific)) ((mingle7))

Pansytilly Joined Mon 06/09/14 Posts: 11310	Sat 02/14/15 07:47 AM
Nice writing Pansytilly I put some thoughts together too. "About love" Some days it grows inside my heart Sometimes it leaves me all alone I'��ve used it I'��ve heard it Some people are fond of it Other people can’t stand it We have taken care of it It can be misjudged It had been misunderstood It'��s been used extremely wrong You can blame it It still doesn'��t complain about us What we have done or haven'��t done You can'��t own it It'��s a short word Very powerful word It�'s my shelter and my shield That word is your key It'��s the key to my door It will guide your words to my heart The famous little word A famous AND infamous little word, often used, misused and abused

unknown_romeo Joined Wed 03/26/14 Posts: 7691	Sat 02/14/15 09:04 AM
Perhaps not.

theseacoast Joined Wed 07/09/14 Posts: 7419	Sat 02/14/15 09:20 AM
Love is giving yourself completely & putting your life on the line & giving all of you in everyway & countless sacrifices only to get screwed in return . . But if you don't put yourself out there 100% and take that risk you will never fully experience the joy and pleasure of a true love and pure love.... thats true mikey but i'be had more then enough encounters regarding love to know it sucks imo....nobody will ever love me & i don't care about it & i doubt if i will ever love again but im happier not being in love.... Mate that exactly how I felt when I came here, I was gonna give up, I was after IEs only, until I opened myself to the friendships I have now, those friendships made me realise that finding real love was worth one last shot.....and look at me now..... I'm happy for u mate ....but i guess i wouldn't want to be involved with love again....it really f**ks One up....ive had experiences before but my last was the greatest heartache ever.... . Romeo, you have so much love inside yourself and you will love. Don�t let anybody to steal it from you. Because you have a wonderful gift to give to a wonderful woman you�ll meet. Please stay open. Love ya, my friend

Pansytilly Joined Mon 06/09/14 Posts: 11310	Sat 02/14/15 05:26 PM Edited by Pansytilly on Sat 02/14/15 05:27 PM
Blessed is the influence of one true, loving human soul on another - George Eliot