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The wind has stopped, My travel has ceased
A journey is over, My past has increased Water on my face, Rain or a tear Comfort of solitude, Nothing to fear To start again, To change, not settle A flower still has, One last petal People I’ve met, Places I’ve seen A world to ponder, Since I was eighteen Lessons learned, From a lifetime of living Seems there was more, Taking than giving Change is constant, Like water in a kettle That flower still has, One last petal To look at one’s self, To open one’s soul To understand yourself, The ultimate goal What can be done, With what one will see To give back to the world, What was given to me No promise of tomorrow, Is etched in metal This flower still has, One last petal My life has changed, Hard to believe Took longer than, A mid-summer’s eve Beauty in a flower, Changes each season Each petal a chance, No rhyme or reason My life as a flower, My ability to mettle My flower still has, It’s One Last Petal |
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Nice one fatp. I appreciate the inspiration even if my inspiration is inversed.
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...my I? Write you poem completely inversed?
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I can not stop you nor do I want to stop you from writing. However my poems are the property of me.
I get the impression that what you want to write may come across as infringement. If that is so, here is what I am willing to do. Go ahead and write it, send me a copy first. I will let you know from there. Sincerely, Fatpuppy |
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Your message was clear in your words so sweet. I have one pedal and one chance to meet. The last chapter I await my prince to play. All our dreams together both night and day. Your words are beautiful and must have come from the heart. Check out my profile and maybe we can start. If not your type I wanted you to know. I enjoyed your words and now I must go.
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