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It may be the stuff of miracles
And you really should have died But you come from A long line of Empiricals And your observations have never lied About yourself .. or .. what else you saw That brought you forward in this life Until you stood at the precipice Of .. all the affliction Trying to ignore and then .. internalizing All of that ****ing strife Followed by seventeen years of agony Filled with .. even more years .. of shame And covered up with horror How did you survive .. that much pain What did you see That .. turned it all around What did you .. believe That kept you above ground And gave your heart Back to your soul Returning .. The Light .. to your eyes You have become .. yourself again You lost the Big Disguise. Vitsec |
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Awesome.
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* Wow, Vits, this is very heavy with both feelings and meaning. I enjoyed reading of your hand very much and do thank ye for tossing this heaviness our way. I always look for this natural depth in others here. You as well? Am so very glad now to have found this worth inside You.
Again, very, very deep, my good, wholesome and worthy friend, Vitsec. Thank you, tommo / Ireland |
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Thanks Tommo .. that one was about me .. I wrote it the morning not long before a lunch with one of my daughters who I had not seen for about a year. Our meeting went very well. I gave her a printed copy.
I very much enjoy the works of yourself, Leigh and some of the others. I have been busy this last year with many things .. so to begin with I was posting but not reading very much .. but now I am starting to get more into that. You are an incredibly good writer and have a very unique, beautiful Old World style. If you are not published you definately should be. I don't know how much ale it is that you may consume .. but if I could get to Ireland I would very much enjoy a good portion of that wonderfully liquid barley .. shared at your table as we exchanged our stories of life experience. :-) Kind regards, Victor. |
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glad it had a happy ending- thanks for sharing - enjoyed reading |
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I so agree with Tommy, well done.
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Edited by
tommyboy1101
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Tue 01/20/15 02:49 AM
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Victor, aye, one day mayhaps we can share ale t'gether here somewhere perhaps inside Dublin city, ( " . . . where the girl's are so pretty, " ) as the ol' song, " Molly Malone " goes. Indeed I find your style in whittling, so inevitably consequential and refreshing. Very deep with meaning and forthrightness. And of course - inner value. All does meet in the middle to produce that sense of calmed reality, ie: Prophetic. Prophet like.
You're definitely a good writer, Vic. Be well, my friend, tommo |
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