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I'm just trying to get an idea of how my profile appeals to people.
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Hi Bkchil,
First, let me thank you for your service. Secondly, let me ask "Couldn't you take off the shades and smile before they snapped the photos?" You should work on that. At least you've got photos and they're not like the dark, blurry ones so many others like to post. Your text blurb starts out pretty well, but you could elaborate a bit. It's not like you're really limited by space, and it's a huge cop-out to tell the ladies to ask you for more information. If they're interested, they will, anyway, but if you don't tell them, they won't know what to ask about. Use that text blurb space to describe yourself and the kind of woman you seek. Tell them what they can expect from you. Maybe throw in what you want to do after college and the military. Use your education to come up with something clever and interesting. Have fun with it! Anyway, it may not matter too much. Lots of people don't really read the profiles, and even with your sunglasses, it's pretty clear that you're a good-looking young man. You'll be alright. For the too-short text and the photos lacking any smile or a clear view of the eyes, I'd rate it 7/10. Good luck! |
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