Topic: "Raindrops"
Glass_eyes's photo
Tue 10/02/07 04:21 PM
I wrote this poem awhile back, and I thought that I would share it with everyone here. Enjoy!

Raindrops

Serene crystal drops.
Tears from the gods
gracefully drift to the cool, moist Earth

They are the dancers of the sky.
Liquid spirits prance and bounce
as they fall endlessly and
crash on the side of my window.
This is their stage.

Their streamers float like silk
and their ballet dresses
spin and spiral around them.
Colors of blue surround the drops
and illuminate their figures.

As the recital subsides,
low rolls of thunder
mimic hand claps.
And a finale of light
streaks across the darkened sky.

southern_bee's photo
Tue 10/02/07 04:32 PM
awww i like it flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Tue 10/02/07 04:32 PM
Very nice I did enjoy hope to see more of youflowerforyou

Glass_eyes's photo
Tue 10/02/07 04:38 PM
I have alot of random poems. This one was for an english assignment, and the teacher liked it so much that he published it in the school paper.

southern_bee's photo
Tue 10/02/07 04:46 PM
o wow congrats

Glass_eyes's photo
Tue 10/02/07 04:49 PM
aww thank you. :heart: I think I'm going to post another one. It starts out happy, but ends on a more gloomy note.

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Tue 10/02/07 04:59 PM
Simply beautiful..flowerforyou

Glass_eyes's photo
Tue 10/02/07 05:04 PM
Thank you, ChubbyCherubPoet. flowerforyou

Glass_eyes's photo
Tue 10/02/07 05:26 PM
Thank you for commenting on my other poem. :heart:

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Tue 10/02/07 05:27 PM
You're welcome flowerforyou I enjoy reading your words

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Tue 10/02/07 05:31 PM
I must have missed this one as well
You are very talented Glass_eyes please continue to post

Glass_eyes's photo
Tue 10/02/07 05:45 PM
*nods* thank you for all your encouragement. I will continue to post when I write some more/find poems I have already written.