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I wrote this poem awhile back, and I thought that I would share it with everyone here. Enjoy!
Raindrops Serene crystal drops. Tears from the gods gracefully drift to the cool, moist Earth They are the dancers of the sky. Liquid spirits prance and bounce as they fall endlessly and crash on the side of my window. This is their stage. Their streamers float like silk and their ballet dresses spin and spiral around them. Colors of blue surround the drops and illuminate their figures. As the recital subsides, low rolls of thunder mimic hand claps. And a finale of light streaks across the darkened sky. |
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awww i like it
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Very nice I did enjoy hope to see more of you
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I have alot of random poems. This one was for an english assignment, and the teacher liked it so much that he published it in the school paper.
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o wow congrats
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aww thank you. I think I'm going to post another one. It starts out happy, but ends on a more gloomy note.
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Simply beautiful..
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Thank you, ChubbyCherubPoet.
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Thank you for commenting on my other poem.
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You're welcome I enjoy reading your words
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I must have missed this one as well
You are very talented Glass_eyes please continue to post |
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*nods* thank you for all your encouragement. I will continue to post when I write some more/find poems I have already written.
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