Topic: The Final Embrace
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Wed 10/29/14 05:23 AM
Edited by Dreadaye on Wed 10/29/14 05:26 AM
Candlelight & an incense coated stick
burning to make a scent of jasmine
waft about a room,
it's walls papered-over
with shadowy emotions.

In the manner of a stream,
the She shadow flows
As liquified nature in motion.
Contour-change her agency.

Via somewhere
Destined for elsewhere.
Slippery as She passes.

Akin to a constellation of Motes
In flux the He shadow shifts-shape
Eternally meandering along
The verges of being

Via elsewhere
Destined for somewhere.
Elusive as He passes

Candles lit
An incense coated stick.
Bodiless emotions projected


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Wed 10/29/14 08:41 PM
This is cool..Watching an incense stick or cone burn is mesmerising..

RiverTigris's photo
Sat 11/01/14 10:16 AM
i enjoyed this, thankyou

tommyboy1101's photo
Sun 11/02/14 07:48 AM
" In the manner of a stream,
the She shadow flows
As liquified nature in motion.
Contour-change her agency.

Via somewhere
Destined for elsewhere.
Slippery as She passes.

Akin to a constellation of Motes
In flux the He shadow shifts-shape
Eternally meandering along
The verges of being "


Nice one, Dread. Very heavy indeed.

tommo / Ireland

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Tue 11/04/14 03:07 PM
Edited by Dreadaye on Tue 11/04/14 03:46 PM
Thank you all for taking the time to read the piece flowerforyou

tommo / Ireland that remix takes us into accessing all areas. And so in turn i say, nice one.

"Akin to a constellation of Motes in flux
The He shadow shifts-shape eternally
meandering along on the verge of being"


Maxisu's photo
Tue 11/04/14 03:14 PM
flowerforyou

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Tue 11/04/14 04:48 PM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

bastet126's photo
Tue 11/04/14 05:12 PM
niiice imagery!! and i dare say, a little double-entendre play on words :)