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Edited by
rapsscallion
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I've fallen off the edge of the world, wonder where I'll land.
Made my bed so I suppose I got to lie in it. Life's a curate's egg when all said and done. I read my poems and surprisingly I like them. No I didn't say they were great; just that I liked them. Flotsam & Jetsam. Oh the lovely memories of a winter'��s morn waking the riverside pathway, yes the one that goes down to the sea. A murder of crows, kicking the dirt with well worn boot. I love that line for some reason, and that homely light giving thoughts of log fires. Dragged that up from a visit to my sisters in France in the middle of winter. I'��ll try the summer next time. What about "Wind blown shadows," they came to my notice while I was standing at a bus stop. Pays you not to daydream all the time. And Black lacquered skies, I think I was painting the wrought iron gate with that metal stuff when that occurred to me. Hard to get that treacle off your fingers. Something else has just occurred to me, and that is I'��m probably boring you all out of your minds. But I was also thinking of us "Poets?" beavering away all over the world, and I felt I was among friends. P S I'm not going to edit this, so it goes on the site just as i've typed it. Bill |
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Bill, very nice.
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Edited by
technovative
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Tue 09/23/14 02:18 PM
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You are indeed among friends Bill. Thank you for sharing your words. I enjoy reading them.
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really Nice....!!!
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Thank you both
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