Topic: Run Away
ImWhtUWnt19's photo
Thu 09/27/07 06:36 PM

Everyone please tell me what you think?





She packs her bags and leaves the place she used to call home,
Down the dark, empty street she roams,
She has no where to go, but she has to get away,
Her mind telling her to leave, but her heart tellin her to stay.

Her world is filled with madness,
Her soul filled with distress,
The voice within telling her there will be a better day,
But she keeps going, she has to run away...bigsmile

heartbrokenbaby's photo
Thu 09/27/07 06:37 PM
its a good poem

no photo
Thu 09/27/07 06:40 PM
good piece...would like to see more from you

ImWhtUWnt19's photo
Thu 09/27/07 06:46 PM
If youd like more...Please let me know ill send more