Topic: Intoxication
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Thu 09/27/07 05:51 AM
Your words intoxicate me
And I drink from them over and over
Liquid love dripping upon my soul
And I am parched
So I must become intoxicated
With the stroke of a pen
And I drink again and again

Words that trickle down my throat
Like the finest wines
And I grow heady with delight
They flow from your pen
Like a fine Merlot
Drinking my fill
Slaking my ever growing thirst

Sweet like honey
Refreshing and intoxicating
My head swirls
My heart leaps and dances
Your words caressing my soul
And I thirst no more



rowdybrooke21's photo
Thu 09/27/07 05:59 AM
Omg i would love to send that to my best friend. We are extremely close and i love him. Your poem described how he makes me feel with his words.

bgeorge's photo
Thu 09/27/07 06:04 AM
beautiful...do you ever put your works to music

LAMom's photo
Thu 09/27/07 06:28 AM
((( Jenni )))))

Most awesome, amazing, so beautiful,,,,, Just simply lovely
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pkh's photo
Thu 09/27/07 06:29 AM
flowerforyou AWESOME

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 09/27/07 06:36 AM
Intoxicating glass of poem...

Bravo! flowerforyou