Topic: Someone with no name..
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Sun 08/10/14 08:43 AM
Dear Someone,



I don't even know your name

But I thought of you


One cold afternoon

Looking out from my window.



I wondered how you'll come

How you'll show yourself.

How you'll know me.

How I'll know you.



Will you come as a knight

in your shining armor?

Will you come as a prince

riding a white horse?



Should I see you as an

angel dropped from heaven?

Or would it be a spaceman

on his parachute from above?



Will I bump into you while

walking down the street?

If so, will you pick up my things

and walk with me home?



Will you be a total stranger

or a long time friend?

Perhaps, someone I know now

but not that close..



When will you come?

Today, tomorrow, the next day..

Will it take you years?

Will it take you miles?



I thought of you one day.

That day when I felt I needed you.

When I felt I could use

Your warm embrace.



I thought of you dear someone.

I thought of you,

Someone who doesn't

have a name.

Killua93's photo
Sun 08/10/14 09:01 AM
did u write that?

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Sun 08/10/14 09:06 AM

did u write that?


I did..embarassed

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Sun 08/10/14 09:55 AM
Edited by sparkyae5 on Sun 08/10/14 09:56 AM
VERY GOOD,,,,,LOT TO THINK ABOUT...flowerforyou

Killua93's photo
Sun 08/10/14 10:08 AM
unbelievable good!!! very very well done. flowerforyou

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Sun 08/10/14 11:53 AM

unbelievable good!!! very very well done. flowerforyou

thank you..

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Sun 08/10/14 11:53 AM

VERY GOOD,,,,,LOT TO THINK ABOUT...flowerforyou

thank you..

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Sun 08/10/14 02:14 PM

Dear Someone,



I don't even know your name

But I thought of you


One cold afternoon

Looking out from my window.



I wondered how you'll come

How you'll show yourself.

How you'll know me.

How I'll know you.



Will you come as a knight

in your shining armor?

Will you come as a prince

riding a white horse?



Should I see you as an

angel dropped from heaven?

Or would it be a spaceman

on his parachute from above?



Will I bump into you while

walking down the street?

If so, will you pick up my things

and walk with me home?



Will you be a total stranger

or a long time friend?

Perhaps, someone I know now

but not that close..



When will you come?

Today, tomorrow, the next day..

Will it take you years?

Will it take you miles?



I thought of you one day.

That day when I felt I needed you.

When I felt I could use

Your warm embrace.



I thought of you dear someone.

I thought of you,

Someone who doesn't

have a name.





adding on to your poem



looking upon my window
as i see the sun full of
glow
and the moon so breath taking
as im watching through the
window in the mist of a soft cry
for im wondering what my
life is going to be
not looking for someone
to share my life
for thats my choice
i have taken upon my soul
but not wishing to seek
out a knight on a white horse
to enter my way
and bring me to my toes
but i have walked miles
around to search for
my own true friend
( myself)
for i was lost in some degree
for i was able to embrace
my self when i felt
i was falling
as today tomorrow
and the future
has the days
to celebrate
a new found you

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Sun 08/10/14 06:17 PM
there's truth in what you added.. :) it has to be the first..