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it's hot
maybe the hottest day ever telephone lines and poles leave no asphalt shadows he stepped in front of me in the shimmering his was the only smile for miles and he made me smile too no clich� ice cream in hand no melting ice cubes yet in that moment air and heat merged and I stayed suspended my mind and body in an altered state of stillness it's hot maybe the hottest day ever |
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I like it..
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it's hot maybe the hottest day ever telephone lines and poles leave no asphalt shadows he stepped in front of me in the shimmering his was the only smile for miles and he made me smile too no clich� ice cream in hand no melting ice cubes yet in that moment air and heat merged and I stayed suspended my mind and body in an altered state of stillness it's hot maybe the hottest day ever Uh huh... |
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Astrid23....thankyou.
tazzops.... 2KidsMom.....hmmmhmmm.. |
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Well another brilliant piece of work....lil steamy over here lol....
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it's hot maybe the hottest day ever telephone lines and poles leave no asphalt shadows he stepped in front of me in the shimmering his was the only smile for miles and he made me smile too no clich� ice cream in hand no melting ice cubes yet in that moment air and heat merged and I stayed suspended my mind and body in an altered state of stillness it's hot maybe the hottest day ever Love this!!!!!!! |
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it's hot maybe the hottest day ever telephone lines and poles leave no asphalt shadows he stepped in front of me in the shimmering his was the only smile for miles and he made me smile too no clich� ice cream in hand no melting ice cubes yet in that moment air and heat merged and I stayed suspended my mind and body in an altered state of stillness it's hot maybe the hottest day ever Love this!!!!!!! |
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Oh my.....
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this truly got me a smile... haha cheers n keepwriting
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thebucfan....thankyou...smile..
mig25...happy you do!!.. Up2Us....oh my...what?.. chax812...thankyou |
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whenever i hear jackson browne on the radio, (which isn't often enough) it always reminds me of the southern california summer nights of my youth.
when i read you, i can't help but think about van morrison performing. no fireworks, no frills, just good solid, smooth, in control, meaningful syntax. "....let your soul and spirit fly into the mystic" |
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k....and I am pleased when you read me... ...and I'm listening to van morrison..into the mystic..and it is smooth.....
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teasing =
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tommy = sweet man
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