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Topic: Ambiguous daydreamer
Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Fri 05/16/14 10:17 PM Edited by Up2Us on Fri 05/16/14 10:20 PM
Ambiguous daydreamer Ambiguous daydreamer Non sequitur satire Surrealism in flight Abstract contrasting juxtapositions Surrealist moments Captured fluorescent kisses Upon realistic winds.... .

RangiBlack Joined Sat 05/17/14 Posts: 3	Sat 05/17/14 04:58 AM
This is such a delicate piece of literary art. The indecision and sense of blaze has been subtly captured by your words.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 05/17/14 05:34 AM
I totally agree...Delicate delivery, powerful message...Thank you ((((Up2))))

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 05/17/14 05:47 AM
Lovely write

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 05/31/14 06:33 AM
Thank you RangiBlack, Leigh2154, and pkh for your very kind critique & comments.....

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 05/31/14 07:19 AM


teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 06/01/14 05:41 AM
captured me

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Mon 06/02/14 08:09 PM
Thanks kc0003 Thanks teasingbrunette....

Laura10 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 671	Mon 06/02/14 08:22 PM


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Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Thu 06/05/14 11:52 AM
Thank you Laura10.... btw your poems. Thanks tazz....

MariahsFantasy Joined Mon 11/28/11 Posts: 6593	Thu 06/12/14 12:13 PM
wow, that hit me in between the eyes, soft and light but enough. fantastic piece

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Thu 06/12/14 02:31 PM
Thank you...MariahsFantasy

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