Wow, love the way you shaped and played with words. Alone, to self absorb and reach deep within.

Lovely

pkh, Akita, thank you so much for taking your, no doubt, very important time out to review my piece. And, thank you both for your comments.

Thank you both, you're very kind.

tommy boy moran / " The Island "

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Lovely

gibbs, you're so very fine Milady. Thank you!

tomo / Ireland

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Good Morning Tommy, I read your poem and in my untutored mind
I do think your writing is very eloquent:

Always a bird in flight in my own skin.

This shelter place of my being.

Left over grace.

You may not shape it but you can make the colours bright, and you
do Tommy lad. Yes you really do, and for others too.

raps,

Thank you so very much. Your words and comments are most exceptional. I Do thank you, Sir. And I am currently warmed.

Please allow that I update you as per your mentioning that I may not 'shape it' - in your comments. Factually, my quintessential friend and colleague, I am about 'shaping' all things word related, that is, if 'shaping' tends to refer to originality. I escape duly into 'self' and work up general word thrusts - as a word man. Not unlike yourself, dear friend. Mine is as yours, total and original.

Thank you so much again, raps. You, I do definitely appreciate.

Be well. Stay safe there.

tommy boy moran / " The Island "

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