Topic: dying
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Tue 10/24/06 12:39 PM
sitting in the shadows
waiting for the emptiness to subside
slipping into the comatose state
eyes closing, breathing slowing down
brain shutting down,heart beats getting slower
blood thickening,final breaths
final heart beats
emptiness subsiding
shadows passing
light emerging
life renewing

Ontario's photo
Tue 10/24/06 12:54 PM
Okay...time out...?

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 10/24/06 01:03 PM
Process of death and going to the other side
Guess when it comes that time and they have
a smile upon there face that must be when they
have seen the light and has been renewed

Ontario's photo
Tue 10/24/06 01:04 PM
Are you sure about that...it could just be gas...!

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 10/24/06 01:07 PM
Ole Ontario! You know I was wrong you do need that date
we had talked about for I think that lady could teach
you a whole lot about life you have not even touched the
surface of yet.

michael1313's photo
Tue 10/24/06 01:16 PM
Poet sounds like th butterfly emerging for th first time to see a new
life before her,,,nice poem,girl,,,touching to those who understand...M.

Ontario's photo
Tue 10/24/06 06:55 PM
T-Girl... I don,t know what you,re talking about...do you...?

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Tue 10/24/06 08:29 PM
Deep Chubby.
That shit's real. I don't know what it feels like to die, and I hope I
have a long tiome to discover it-- but I hope its more peaceful than
painful, fa sho!