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Topic: ~Ache~
Laura10 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 671	Wed 04/16/14 04:56 AM Edited by Laura10 on Wed 04/16/14 05:02 AM
Dissociated Tango I feel you with every breath A weight that won't lift Not hard, not heavy More like a dull ache I wonder if I come across your mind If you dreamed of a beautiful reunion If you yearned in your heart Or felt that ache too Was it completely one sided Awakened from an idealistic dream Conversations skillfully spun As feet intertwined in a delicate tango Beginning to hope and dream Thinking lives were beginning to see The possibility of a future together, an ever after Healing the woundings and aches of long past Mind wanting to protect the heart Heart wanting to protect the love Love wanting to give it all out Fear wanting to keep it all in Was it to protect the heart? And if so, why Isolation and deafening silence Doesn't suppress the ache No, it only leaves one to wonder If you dreamed of a beautiful reunion If you yearned in your heart Or felt that ache too I guess we will never know...

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 04/16/14 05:16 AM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Wed 04/16/14 06:01 AM
Your words are beautiful, Laura...

Conrad_73 Joined Sat 09/29/07 Posts: 22488	Wed 04/16/14 06:06 AM Edited by Conrad_73 on Wed 04/16/14 06:08 AM
I am not much in this part of the Forum,but those words really did hit home!

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 04/16/14 06:34 AM
Dissociated Tango I feel you with every breath A weight that won't lift Not hard, not heavy More like a dull ache I wonder if I come across your mind If you dreamed of a beautiful reunion If you yearned in your heart Or felt that ache too Was it completely one sided Awakened from an idealistic dream Conversations skillfully spun As feet intertwined in a delicate tango Beginning to hope and dream Thinking lives were beginning to see The possibility of a future together, an ever after Healing the woundings and aches of long past Mind wanting to protect the heart Heart wanting to protect the love Love wanting to give it all out Fear wanting to keep it all in Was it to protect the heart? And if so, why Isolation and deafening silence Doesn't suppress the ache No, it only leaves one to wonder If you dreamed of a beautiful reunion If you yearned in your heart Or felt that ache too I guess we will never know... well that about covers it...loved it..

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 04/16/14 04:46 PM
nicely done...

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Thu 04/17/14 01:09 AM


Kaleijoscope Joined Fri 10/15/10 Posts: 3319	Thu 04/17/14 01:19 AM
Achingly Beautiful...

Laura10 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 671	Sun 04/20/14 06:35 PM


Laura10 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 671	Sun 04/20/14 06:36 PM
I am not much in this part of the Forum,but those words really did hit home! Thank you Conrad

Laura10 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 671	Sun 04/20/14 06:37 PM
Your words are beautiful, Laura... Thank you Leigh

Laura10 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 671	Sun 04/20/14 06:37 PM
Dissociated Tango I feel you with every breath A weight that won't lift Not hard, not heavy More like a dull ache I wonder if I come across your mind If you dreamed of a beautiful reunion If you yearned in your heart Or felt that ache too Was it completely one sided Awakened from an idealistic dream Conversations skillfully spun As feet intertwined in a delicate tango Beginning to hope and dream Thinking lives were beginning to see The possibility of a future together, an ever after Healing the woundings and aches of long past Mind wanting to protect the heart Heart wanting to protect the love Love wanting to give it all out Fear wanting to keep it all in Was it to protect the heart? And if so, why Isolation and deafening silence Doesn't suppress the ache No, it only leaves one to wonder If you dreamed of a beautiful reunion If you yearned in your heart Or felt that ache too I guess we will never know... well that about covers it...loved it.. Thank you 2KidsMom

Laura10 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 671	Sun 04/20/14 06:38 PM
nicely done... Thank you KC

Laura10 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 671	Sun 04/20/14 06:40 PM
Thank you LadyWind

Laura10 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 671	Sun 04/20/14 06:40 PM
Achingly Beautiful... Thank you Kaleijoscope

BrandNewJourney Joined Tue 02/25/14 Posts: 6055	Sun 04/20/14 07:32 PM
Nicely done

TaraSchniederxx Joined Sun 04/20/14 Posts: 4	Mon 04/21/14 12:15 AM
wow that was so good

ImagineTruth Joined Fri 08/02/13 Posts: 50	Mon 04/21/14 10:07 PM
Dissociated Tango I feel you with every breath A weight that won't lift Not hard, not heavy More like a dull ache I wonder if I come across your mind If you dreamed of a beautiful reunion If you yearned in your heart Or felt that ache too Was it completely one sided Awakened from an idealistic dream Conversations skillfully spun As feet intertwined in a delicate tango Beginning to hope and dream Thinking lives were beginning to see The possibility of a future together, an ever after Healing the woundings and aches of long past Mind wanting to protect the heart Heart wanting to protect the love Love wanting to give it all out Fear wanting to keep it all in Was it to protect the heart? And if so, why Isolation and deafening silence Doesn't suppress the ache No, it only leaves one to wonder If you dreamed of a beautiful reunion If you yearned in your heart Or felt that ache too I guess we will never know... lovely

Laura10 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 671	Tue 05/06/14 11:38 AM
Thank you BrandNewJourney Thank you Tara Thank you ImagineTruth

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Tue 05/06/14 04:05 PM
Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!