Topic: “Until You Give All”
TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 09/16/07 04:27 AM
“Until You Give All”

You say you know how to show.
Your love and let others know.
But even through the words you throw.
You really can’t let your love flow.

In your eyes you can’t see it is you.
And in the things you say and do.
You really do not have a clue.
For you look at it in a different view.

Though you see the beauty life can hold.
And to others you have told.
In your heart there is a part that is cold.
When it should instead all be like gold.

Though you say your emotions run high.
You admit you never cry.
One must wonder why.
That you still deny.

You can not give all.
Could it be from your life you recall?
While growing up and when you were small.
Within your heart did you build a wall?

Life you have learned to live.
To your children you have leaned to give.
You have learned how to survive.
Through your kids you have learned to forgive.

The love you have for them is very clear.
It can be seen and very sincere.
Even still you never shed a tear.
Deep inside do you still have the fear?

If you give all they will turn.
And walk away is this your concern?
Even though love is something you yearn.
Someday you must realize one will return.

All the love you are willing to give.
You must open your eyes and your heart for it to arrive.
Then you will truly know what it is to thrive.
Then you will find out what it is to really like to live.


K.L.M
9/16/2007



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Sun 09/16/07 04:31 AM
wow....that was amazing....kinda hit home for me...thanks for sharing

wildsideof35's photo
Sun 09/16/07 05:24 AM
beautiful and well put!!!flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 09/16/07 10:58 AM
((((( Kristi )))))

Most awesome,,, So beautiful and so true,,,,,
:heart: flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sun 09/16/07 11:23 AM
my texas wind, this is my favorite, all the walls, from even when we were precious kids, so hard to climb, to be real, even the kindest of us, there is a bit of acting, but how do we become real, this is the second question to life, the first, how do we find the spirit that gave birth to our souls

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 09/16/07 11:53 AM
flowerforyou so true...

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 09/16/07 01:18 PM
Hoosierlady64 thank you for reading does make one think humm

wildsideof35 thank you very much also for your kind wordsbigsmile

Denise thanks girlfriendflowerforyou

jimz sweeeeeeet thank you, we must look within for the viscous cycle of life that we must change so the same mistakes will not continue we must change ourselves

MsTeddyBear2u thanks a million for readingflowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 09/16/07 07:59 PM
This one was wrote to a very special friend I do hope you
have found the one you can truly open your heart to and
let them in. I want you to know I truly did care!!:cry: