Wandering the dark desolate streets
Head bowed, Shuffling her feet
A hollow empty feeling casts a shadow
Upon her heart
If you look into her eyes
You can clearly see
All the lies,
Empty promises
And broken dreams
Looking closer still
You can see
A bitter storm of hatred
She hates who she has become
Tiny droplets of rain begin to fall
In the distance she spots an overhang
With tired feet and a heavy heart
She sinks down against the wall
Hatred turning to sorrow
Tears slide down her cheeks
Best friends forever?
There is no such thing
Life is meant to be lived alone
I'm sorry
Is nothing but a phrase
Only useful for dimming guilt
Wiping the tears and make-up away
She walks on
With nothing more than a hollow mpty feeling
Casting a shadow
Upon her useless heart

That's beautiful but very sad. I've felt that way myself!!
Thanks for sharing!!

Shadow...

That was so beautiful...we can only hope that your heart feel better...soon

very beautiful, and touching

thanks rockermom

You are very welcome shadow

Saddened by a lost love the lonely old man gets into his car and heads back to a small town he use to call home along the way he contemplates if this will be the last time he puts his heart out there,or if the semi coming down the road will be the one to end his misery.Nope he lets the semi pass and tries to fill his mind with happier thoughts after all he has a son to raise and how would that feel to leave him with that kind of legacy.miles and miles pass by and the old man tries to fill his mind with happier thoughts again after all hes going back home after being gone for ten long years ..it sure will be good to see home again back to the country open farmland ,deer cows hay fields tobacco fields the smells the friendly folks who still wave at you as you drive by only twenty more miles til home as he turns the last corner to enter his home town hes taken aback by what he sees ten years ten years no more open fields friendly faces tall trees but row after row of houses lines and lines of traffic no friendly waves his hometown is no longer...wheres that semi?

i dont get it but ok

Beautifully written and very sad.

Beautifully written and very sad.

Yes very sad but yet beautiful and also felt that way many times myself good one girl