Topic: ~ last
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Fri 03/28/14 07:05 PM
she saw the taxi first
she got to her feet
went through the revolving doors
she could hear him speaking
she could sense he was about
to reach for her
she almost ran to the car
flung open the door
told the driver to go
she turned her head
to look at him
one last time
tears blurred her eyes
as the taxi moved forward
she slipped on her sunglasses
in her mouth lay her last words
to him
we're not lovers
we're not friends
we're just
not

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Fri 03/28/14 07:26 PM
flowers flowers flowers :cry:

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Sat 03/29/14 12:14 AM
Your poems always have a poignant story, which is nice
and makes them very interesting to read. I'm learning
from you, and why not/

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Sat 03/29/14 05:06 AM
tazzops....flowerforyou

rapscallion...& I thankyou for reading,learning is always a goodthing for everyone..flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Sat 03/29/14 05:40 AM
Always a pleasure teasing

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Sat 03/29/14 07:25 AM
pkh....thankyou.flowerforyou

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Sun 03/30/14 05:51 AM
Deep, teasing. Meaningful. I felt heaviness in this one. Depth of heart and mind. Deeper moments of emotion prevail here.

Well done, Baby. You'e so fine! :heart:

tommy boy moran / Ireland

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Sun 03/30/14 07:43 AM
tommyboy....I appreciate the words you've written to me on this sunday morning...flowerforyou