Topic: Missing Someone
cha7385's photo
Fri 03/21/14 06:09 AM
Missing Someone
By: Cha7385

Each day passes by
Without a simple “Hi”
Creates feeling of eagerness within
Which is something that can’t be imagine
that dominates not just in the heart
but in the thoughts of those who are apart.

Staring on the blank spaces of the hand
Is worst than wishing for a shooting star to land
Hearing that music alert
Is much better than listening to Mozart
And a whisper of that sweet “Hello”
Can subside all those blues.

Melancholic as it may
To have a slight conversation I pray
Absence deepens one’s longingness,
Being afar makes the emptiness
Unbearable in every minute that passed
which makes happiness so hard to grasp

Amazing as it is
To yearn for someone you miss
is like seeing darkness inside a brighten room
feels like a stranger in your own home
walking lonesome in a crowded street
and feeling weak to stand on your own feet

Looking forward to every conversation that once occured
Is what this lonely heart wants to figured
Didnt know why suddenly the flame had slowly diminish
without a clue if all this is finish
Yet within that lonely heart
Still is hopeful that the two would never fall apart.

pkh's photo
Fri 03/21/14 06:20 AM
Sad but nice

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Fri 03/21/14 06:36 AM
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cha7385's photo
Fri 03/21/14 02:08 PM

Sad but nice


Thanks PKH...flowerforyou missing someone is so hard esp when you get used to having them

cha7385's photo
Fri 03/21/14 02:09 PM

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(((2kids))) flowerforyou

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Fri 03/21/14 02:13 PM
Nice write....smokin

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Fri 03/21/14 05:15 PM
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In2youafew's photo
Fri 03/21/14 06:59 PM
Yes it is nicely said. I too am going through it.

cha7385's photo
Sat 03/22/14 07:07 AM
Thanks Up2Us, thewaterbearer & In2youafew.. for taking time reading my poem.. flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

charliechecksum's photo
Sat 03/22/14 04:32 PM
Very nice work indeed but this was no exercise but another experience from true life.

cha7385's photo
Mon 03/24/14 07:53 AM

Very nice work indeed but this was no exercise but another experience from true life.


flowerforyou flowerforyou happy thanks... all the poems I make are base on my experiences..

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Mon 03/24/14 10:11 AM
flowers :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Tue 03/25/14 06:40 AM

flowers :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


thanks for taking time reading this piece..:smile: flowerforyou