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Topic: Lost
JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Wed 09/12/07 02:09 PM
I am unbidden Wrecked to my core I wander aimlessly Misplaced once more Searching for my beacon A light to grab a hold But the fog comes rolling in And instills the bitter cold A glimmer on the horizon Is what I wish to see Something to hope for Something to set me free

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Wed 09/12/07 02:15 PM
Awww we are all searching at one time or other for that place we feel we belong. If all else fails grap a rope very nice

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 09/12/07 02:22 PM
Great WORDS, great POEM,,,,U WILL FIND....

shutterguy Joined Thu 08/09/07 Posts: 22516	Wed 09/12/07 03:04 PM
very nice "jb"

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 09/12/07 05:33 PM


JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Fri 09/14/07 08:52 AM
Thank you all for your comments

HangedMan Joined Sun 05/13/07 Posts: 13640	Sat 09/15/07 12:29 PM
Very nice JB

MIKE4001 Joined Tue 05/29/07 Posts: 2392	Sat 09/15/07 12:33 PM
I know how you feel......I feel thae same way at times

JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Sat 09/15/07 12:38 PM
thank you gentlemen i believe we've all been there. it's required.

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Sat 09/15/07 01:21 PM
SHAPES lost but never found life continues to circle around cicles are fine if you never want to find the way out, out of the box, boxes are square but you can get out if you dare to look up and see the hand from me TOMBRAIDER

JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Sat 09/15/07 01:32 PM
hmmmm....interesting...i like it....ever thought about putting your stuff all together in it's own thread?? just kidding...very nice.

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Sat 09/15/07 01:57 PM
thank you jb im just an old country fart computer illiterate and sometimes ignorant whats a thread i just write what sparks my mind at the time thanks again

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