Hey all. I'm a newly separated guy. Not desperate (okay maybe a little lonely); just not sure what to include. Help?

Hi. New to this, let me see if I can rate you.

Wow guy sounds like your life is a train wreck right now from this profile.

That is like painting a bright red target on your back which you probably are not going to like in the long run.

Just because Mommy moved out does not mean she can't come back and take the kids and everything you have got. I would suggest you be very careful how you run your life this next year. Choking on your own words is a bitter pill to swallow.

Not to say you can't make friends and learn a lot on Mingle just don't pick your own poison.

Hi I'm new here anybody can help me?to get what I need.

Hi dgutsche,

It's a really good profile. You seem to have made all the points you needed to and you photos are really good, too.

I guess the only improvement I can think of would be to make it more positive. It's already clear from your biographic data that you're divorced, so you don't need to depress us with your anxiety about moving on. Maybe you can use that space to talk yourself up a bit. Tell the ladies about you accomplishments. Great job or things that you're really good at, might do. Anyway, what you've got now is still pretty good, and your picture shows you're still a good-looking, young man. You'll be okay.

Overall, because the part about moving on makes you seem so sad, I rate it only 8/10.

Good luck!