Topic: Burning Bed...
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Fri 02/14/14 12:18 AM
My body's burning in my bed
My instincts are true
And in this moment I think of you
The fire burns hotter
.
.
I do not curse the match you struck
.
I do not curse the lightening
.
I do not curse the sunshine
.
I do not curse the rain
.
You said you could see me
.
But you never said if I'd recognise you
.
Or what casing would suit you
.
This time
.
You split yourself into three
.
The selection process?
.
No
.
In your divisions
.
.
You satisfy

For you, by Tulip1969

Pengwen's photo
Fri 02/14/14 12:48 AM
Your eyes start to burn as your body did
But tears soaked your vision to ease the pain
The burning heat is replaced by warmth
As your tears try to console your aching heart.

Close your eyes and go to sleep
I'll give you dreams to forget your pain
I'll sing you lullabies to soothe your heart
Be one with the night, embrace the moonlight.

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Sat 02/15/14 01:55 PM
The burning is thankfully not of pain
The burning is desire
The man who chose to strike the match
Did so with his fire

I will not curse the rain that falls
Because his fire in me calls
From across the sea, he to me
And I go there willingly

Thank you Pengwen for your very beautiful reply. *bows head low in appreciation*

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Sat 02/15/14 03:10 PM
Excellent

Both of you.

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Mon 02/17/14 05:42 PM
very nice.

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Sat 02/22/14 05:52 AM
:)

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Sat 02/22/14 05:53 AM
:)

Pengwen's photo
Sun 02/23/14 10:43 PM
Yup, it's just that I liked your poem thus it inspired me to respond in such way. ^_^

Fracus16's photo
Mon 02/24/14 01:56 AM
You are the most beautiful woman
Just the thought of skin on skin
Makes me smile deep with in.
then came that night
When we made love so tight.
I can't believe I woke up the next morning and my penis was burning!!!

You no good little tramp!!! Why did you say you were a virgin???

Ummmmm... True story about a 16 year old losing hos virginity.

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Tue 02/25/14 12:53 PM
Unnecessary to share that but I suppose you have your reasons.

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Tue 02/25/14 12:54 PM
I loved it Pengwen. X)

Pengwen's photo
Mon 03/03/14 02:52 PM
Thanks! :3

Fracus16's photo
Tue 03/04/14 01:30 AM
Tulip, nothing on here is unnecessary. If you know me even the slightest, then you would know it was a joke. I love poetry and am one of the rare ones that reads Alost all.
99% of the time I give praise cause writing is difficult.

The sight caught me on a night where I was frisky a little fracus was to be had.

No harm intended.

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Wed 03/05/14 12:58 PM
Fracus16, it was unnecessary to 'tag' your verse to mine and would have been better as a new poem. Please let your 'frisky' side out on a new thread perhaps. Both mine and Pengwens' verse were complimentary. Not harm done but your 'saltiness' was out of step.