Topic: Burning Bed... | |
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My body's burning in my bed
My instincts are true And in this moment I think of you The fire burns hotter . . I do not curse the match you struck . I do not curse the lightening . I do not curse the sunshine . I do not curse the rain . You said you could see me . But you never said if I'd recognise you . Or what casing would suit you . This time . You split yourself into three . The selection process? . No . In your divisions . . You satisfy For you, by Tulip1969 |
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Your eyes start to burn as your body did
But tears soaked your vision to ease the pain The burning heat is replaced by warmth As your tears try to console your aching heart. Close your eyes and go to sleep I'll give you dreams to forget your pain I'll sing you lullabies to soothe your heart Be one with the night, embrace the moonlight. |
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The burning is thankfully not of pain
The burning is desire The man who chose to strike the match Did so with his fire I will not curse the rain that falls Because his fire in me calls From across the sea, he to me And I go there willingly Thank you Pengwen for your very beautiful reply. *bows head low in appreciation* |
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Excellent
Both of you. |
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very nice.
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:)
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:)
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Yup, it's just that I liked your poem thus it inspired me to respond in such way. ^_^
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You are the most beautiful woman
Just the thought of skin on skin Makes me smile deep with in. then came that night When we made love so tight. I can't believe I woke up the next morning and my penis was burning!!! You no good little tramp!!! Why did you say you were a virgin??? Ummmmm... True story about a 16 year old losing hos virginity. |
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Unnecessary to share that but I suppose you have your reasons.
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I loved it Pengwen. X)
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Thanks! :3
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Tulip, nothing on here is unnecessary. If you know me even the slightest, then you would know it was a joke. I love poetry and am one of the rare ones that reads Alost all.
99% of the time I give praise cause writing is difficult. The sight caught me on a night where I was frisky a little fracus was to be had. No harm intended. |
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Fracus16, it was unnecessary to 'tag' your verse to mine and would have been better as a new poem. Please let your 'frisky' side out on a new thread perhaps. Both mine and Pengwens' verse were complimentary. Not harm done but your 'saltiness' was out of step.
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